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Hello, Melancholic!, Volume 3

January 3rd, 2023

Beginnings are easy. You have an idea. There’s this character and stuff happens and it affects them and they react. Why are they there, what happens, how it affects them, can all be built up over time. But beginnings, they’re easy. The hard part is what happens after you’ve explained why they are there, and why that thing that happened affected them that way. Then, you have to buckle down and show what happened after that.

In Volume 1, we met Minato, an introverted and unusually tall first-year in high school whose love of music had been ruined, when she was traumatized by bandmates in her previous school. She is recruited by Hibiki, a second-year, to join an impromptu band club. It was a beginning that hit me hard. Re-learning to enjoy music, struggling to fit in, typical school stuff. We’ve all been some part of “there.”

In Volume 2, Minato and the rest of the band gel, and they give an amazing live performance. Minato takes her first steps out of her shell and in a moment of having had too much fun, admits she likes Hibiki.

Now we are at Volume 3 of Hello, Melancholic! by Ohsawa Yayoi and all the beginning stuff has been laid out. What can possibly happen? Well..a lot.

Hibiki will be graduating. Minato’s basically in denial about that. She concerned that Hibiki (and the rest of the band) will reject her. And in the middle of this, Hibiki, ignoring everything that is laying between them, pushes Minato to take the chance of a lifetime. It doesn’t go well when they try and talk it out the first time. Minato is concerned that every joy she has is too fragile to survive the moment.

I loved this series when I reviewed it in Japanese and my fondness for it carries over into the final volume of the English language edition. Girls finding love in band…well, I’ve been there, so yeah. ^_^ Ohsawa Yayoi’s art continues to improve, her characters’ expressions of shock and pain and joy are just fantastic.

The translation by Margaret Ngo and adaptation by MaryKate Jasper was terrific. You could *hear* their voices as Hibiki and Minato have it all out. Extra props to Seven Seas for bumping up almost all the lettering to full retouch. It looks fantastic. I know it’s harder and takes longer, but thank you Mo Harrison for the effort.  Once again a top effort from the team at Seven Seas and an outstanding reading experience. Now can we get 2DK, GPen Meshamashitokei, I wonder?

Beginnings are easy, but picking the first manga I review of the year is hard.  Hello, Melancholic! wraps up something that feels like it began a long time ago, and now we’re all ready to move on into what’s ahead. ^_^

Ratings:

Art – 9
Story – 9 More conflict in this volume is a good thing, as Minato becomes less passive
Characters – 9
Service – 1
Yuri – 9

Overall – 9

 

I’d give this adorable 3-volume series to anyone who wanted a feel-good schoolgirl Yuri story.





Hello, Melancholic!, Volume 2

July 29th, 2022

Hello, Melancholic!, Volume 2 is, quite possibly, my favorite single volume of a school life Yuri story ever. ^_^

Minato faces her greatest challenge – performing with the band in public. We understood that she was traumatized by her former bandmates. But here, she is in the unenviable position of facing them down once again. Not only does she rise to the occasion, she excels! Minato, bolstered by Hibiki, Chika, Sachiko and Emma, faces down the fears of her previous self and moves past them.

For that alone, I loved this book. It’s not enough to know what’s held us back – we also have to keep moving forward. Minato takes a whopping huge step forward when she takes control of the audience. It won’t fix all her self-esteem issues, but it puts her in a much better place from which to address the rest.

From there on, this becomes a much more conventional Yuri romance story, but now, here, we’re open to it. The Minato that was terrified of standing out could never have been a partner to anyone, but the Minato that can confidently stand on the stage, can. And so we turn our attention to Chika and Sachiko and find out that there’s a whole lot we don’t know about them.

There’s still a lot for Minato and Hibiki to work through. As I said of this volume in Japanese, “I cannot tell you why, exactly, I want Minato to be happy – although there are a lot of superficially obvious reasons that I might feel that way – but I really want Minato to be happy. If Hibiki can make her happy, I’m all in for them. But I also know that there’s a lot standing between them before they get there…among them Minato herself. She’s a walking bundle of insecurity and hesitation. Ohsawa Yayoi’s come so far in the last few years – Minato’s expressions are really something. ^_^” 

That said, as we get ready for Volume 3 to come out in November, we are right there with them, ready to lend our good wishes. ^_^

Ratings:

Art – 9
Story – 9 More conflict in this volume is a good thing, as Minato becomes less passive
Characters – 9
Service – 1
Yuri – 9

Overall – 9

Another fantastic effort from Margaret Ngo, Marykate Jasper, Mo Harrison, H. Qi, Leighhanna DeRouen, B.Lillian Martin, Jenn Grunigen, and everyone on the Seven Seas team! This manga makes me cheer, every time. ^_^





Hello, Melancholic!, Volume 1

February 7th, 2022

It is my incredible pleasure today to introduce you to one of my favorite series of 2020, Yayoi Ohsawa’s  Hello Melancholic!, Volume 1.

Minato’s goal in life, is to slip through without being noticed. This goal is difficult, as she is unusually tall, a little shabby and her voice is rough with disuse. She’s extremely nervous and afraid of offending anyone. So when she notices someone playing music in her school that, notably, has no concert bad, she’s intrigued despite herself. And…she has been noticed. The upperclassman she saw finds her, and Minato’s life is completely turned around.

Hibiki is a 18-wheeler truck of a personality and she’ll wheedle, cajole and beg if it gets her what she wants. A fair objection at this point is that she’s really not listening to what Minato wants and that may make some readers uncomfortable. If you’re able to let that go in hopes that Hibiki’s plan is pure of heart, I can assure you that it is. All she wants is to have fun and play music! 

As I said in my review of Volume 1 in Japanese, “Hello, Melancholic! is a story of a life redeemed from the darkness. It’s a joy to experience sneaking out and jammimg with Minato and a delight to see her lifted by Hibiki and given space and imprimatur to spread her wings and fly.”

But you don’t have to rely on me to convince you. Instead, let me once again share this magnificent 23 minute voiced manga promotional video from Ichijinsha. This is the promo video Ohsawa-sensei refers to in the author’s note. If this doesn’t convince you, feel free to walk away and not look back. But for me, this was a clincher. It even has an original piece of music, but for me, it was the color that nailed the point.

 

 

Minato has been traumatized, but Hibiki is a perfect psychopomp to help move past her trauma. By giving Minato a welcoming space – even if Minato can’t quite stop waiting for the other shoe to fall- she’s able to start healing. We’ll see so much more of that in the upcoming two volumes.

I want to thank Margaret Ngo and Marykate Jasper for their translation and adaptation and Mo Harrison for the evocative lettering. There’s no actual music in this manga, but the sounds of music making are very visible. It’s important for the lettering to capture that. Thanks to the whole team at Seven Seas.

Lastly, I’m absolutely delighted that we finally have something from Ohsawa Yayoi! She had a bunch of one-shots that became her Black Yagi/Strange Babies series, which I adored and I still hope to see 2DK, G Pen, Mezamashitokei. in English one day. In the meantime, we have this three-volume story that is,something I wish we got more of – people being empower in small, but important ways, to grow.

Ratings:

Art – 9
Story – 8
Characters – 8
Service – 2 A bit, but Hibiki’s doing it on purpose
Yuri – 1

Overall – 8 because it’ll get better and needs room to go up. ^_^

Finding yourself and friendship in band. There’s nothing more I could ask of a high school manga.





2DK, G Pen Aftertime Ohsawa Yayoi Short Story Collection (2DK、Gペン、アフタータイム。大沢やよい 短編集)

November 11th, 2021

Ohsawa Yayoi’s adult life romance, 2DK, G Pen, Mezamashitokei was a part of the monthly Yuri contributions from Comic Yuri Hime from 2015 to 2018. After 8 volumes, in which we became familiar with the details of our protagonists’ lives and loves, we may be forgiven for wondering how they are doing now. ^_^

Ohsawa-sensei gives us a glimpse of Nanami and Kaede’s home life in the cover story of her new collection, 2DK, G Pen Aftertime Ohsawa Yayoi Short Story Collection (2DK、Gペン、アフタータイム。大沢やよい 短編集). They haven’t changed. Nanami is still busy, Kaede is still incapable of taking care of herself and a little prone to imagining things, but they are still love-love.

This is followed by a her recent shorts for Comic Yuri Hime. “Sono Hi, Night Date Nanode” is a delightful story about falling in love with, and under, the stars. And “Take Out Dekimaska?” is a nice little scenario between a delivery woman and a waitress that was both kind of sweet and deeply satisfying when the waitress loses her patience with the delivery woman not cluing in.

“Guragura Platonic” is a Ohsawa’s spin on a sex-worker fantasy. “Campus ni Trap,” is a teacher and student story (with bonus drunken teacher, so CW if this is not your thing). The final story is one of my faves, “Office Sempai, Kiraina Watashi,” which wraps up the 2DK storyline by showing us Tanihara Yuuko, Nanami’s over-acheiving kouhai, who now has a mythos of her own because Ohsawa-sensei could not let her go. I have a calendar from a Yuriten gone by of Tanihara exhorting me to give it my all at work, every month. It’s so annoying and hilarious I keep it on the living room table.  This month she reminds me that Business = Drama, so “Everyday Make Drama”. 「えヴリデイ、メイク・ドラマ」

Tanihara’s new kouhai just *cannot* figure out her enthusiastic sempai. Okata is completely confused by this bundle of motivational poster-energy and finds her both annoy and realizes that she likes her. ^_^

It was lovely to revisit with characters we know and meet new ones. ^_^

Ratings:

Art – 9
Story – 9
Characters – 9
Service – 5 There is some nudity and sexual situations, especially in the sex worker story.
Yuri – 10

Overall – 9

I’ll always look forward to Ohsawa-sensei’s work and to see where it takes us and her. ^_^





Hello, Melancholic!, Volume 3 (ハロー、メランコリック!)

June 2nd, 2021

When we last saw them, Minato had just blurted out that she liked Hibiki. As we begin Hello, Melancholic!, Volume 3 (ハロー、メランコリック!) everything between them is so normal it’s making them both uncomfortable. The pressure is going to build and the rest of the band is just waiting for it to blow. In the mean time, new first-years have joined and Minato is now a sempai

But, we’re not done yet, because Hibiki’s online posts opens an opportunity for Minato that she is absolutely not at all ready to take. A local band of adults – one that has a reputation for a high level of musical proficiency – has invited Minato to try out for a position as backup, a high honor. Minato’s good enough, but she is emotionally still so scarred from her previous experience in trying out for a band position that she rejects the chance. Even when Hibiki helps her to confront her fears, Minato continues to retreat into herself, eventually lashing out at Hibiki.

This too comes to a head, after Minato asks the only other second year in the group for advice. Luckily for her, Emma is a good advice giver and in a moment of clarity, Minato realizes that she’s never had a friend to ask advice from – and it takes her breath away. Finally everything comes down to a confrontation, and as the rest of the band eavesdrop outside the door, Hibiki and Minato say some things that they need to say. Minato works through last lingering doubts about Hibiki going off to college with help from the ever-chill Sachiko and Chika.  The book ends with Minato (sporting a new look) and Hibiki meeting up again on a spring day a year later.

The extra chapter delves into Emma’s secret life with an older woman.

Okay, you’re probably looking at this and wondering why I picked *this* story for day two of Pride Month, since I’m usually so intentional about my choices? (I hope you notice that I’m intentional.) Well for a couple of reasons – things that happen in this series that I think are very relevant to right now.

One – this is a story about a kid who had been bullied and it is not a miraculous story of redemption or perseverance. Minato slowly, carefully sheds some of the baggage she was burdened with, but it’s not without risk to her and to survive it, she just grows. The whole school isn’t applauding her, she isn’t made prom queen, this isn’t a Hollywood story. Minato finds some people who help her grow up and grow beyond the damage – I honestly wish this was a narrative that we got more often. Most of us who were bullied don’t get a reckoning, we just get old and the things that weighed us down, don’t anymore. I was in college when one of the kids who had bullied me as as a tween was sitting in a class I walked into. She saw me and said something rude and I just…laughed at her. I mean, really? Was I supposed to care what she thought? It was too ridiculous to imagine.

Two – and this made me cheer out loud. Minato, all upset at losing Hibiki to college, assumes Chika and Sachiko will be going to school together. As it turns out, Chika’s going to trade school to be a dental hygenist, Sachiko’s going on to a private school. Minato, shocked, asked if they aren’t upset at never seeing each other and they stare at her like she’s turned purple. Why? Because they have cell phones, for pity’s sake. Cell phones and days off and maybe they’ll move in together, but really – there is no reason that high school is the end of it allTM. Why wouldn’t they keep seeing each other?

Three – yesterday was pretty heavy going with The Rose of Versailles and tomorrow is pretty heavy going and I wanted something light and fun and a story about a girl meeting and falling in love with her sempai in band is about as close to an autobiography as I’ll ever get in a manga. ^_^

Ratings:

Art – 9
Story – 9 More conflict in this volume is a good thing, as Minato becomes less passive
Characters – 9
Service – 1
Yuri – 9

Overall – 9

Thank you Ohsawa-sensei for this utterly delightful story.