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The Summer You Were There, Volume 1, Guest Review by Eleanor W

November 16th, 2022

It’s Guest Review Wednesday here on Okazu and I am so delighted to welcome back Eleanor once again. Today she’s going to take a look at Yuama’s dramatic school life series. Take it away, Eleanor, and I’ll be back at the end. 
It’s nice to be back again. This is my 3rd review for Okazu, and I’m finally reviewing a manga volume this time. I’ve reviewed the British Museum’s manga exhibition and a yuri visual novel called Perfect Gold. You can find me on Twitter (for now) @st_owly and the same on Instagram.

Having loved the author’s previous work The Girl I Want Is So Handsome, I was excited to check out their new series, The Summer You Were There, Volume 1. First thing to note is that Seven Seas have done a lovely job on the cover of the English release. I really like the water bubbles and the falling paper in the background of the illustration, and the title itself is embossed which is a nice touch. Unfortunately, the contents don’t really hold up so well in comparison. I’m not the biggest fan of ā€œlet’s pretend to date each other, teeheeā€ stories at the best of times, and this one hasn’t exactly converted me.

The story starts like this: your typical bookworm (Shizuku) encounters a popular girl (Kaori) who for some unknown reason, wants to date her. Kaori finds Shizuku’s super secret discarded novel manuscript which no one is ever supposed to read (why would you throw it in the bin at school then??) so of course the two of them start ā€œdatingā€ because Kaori strong arms Shizuku into it, and the excuse is ā€œI want to help you research material for your next story.ā€

ā€œIf you want to make your ā€˜dying of high school manga disease’ plotline land emotionally, maybe don’t telegraph it with the subtlety of a boot to the head.ā€ I couldn’t have put this better myself, thank you Toukochan on the Okazu Discord server for letting me use this magnificent line. I didn’t find either of them particularly endearing individually, and by the end of the book I still didn’t particularly care for them as a couple either.

Having said that, chapter 3 was by far my favourite of the book. The girls end up going to the library together and actually start genuinely bonding over favourite books and authors. I wish more of the book had been like this, and I hope there’s more of this going forward. The obligatory yuri aquarium date in the next 2 chapters just didn’t land the same way. 

I would like to know more about Kaori’s motivations and why she wants to date Shizuku. At the end of the book Shizuku confesses something big to her, and she says she already knows everything. I suspect I know exactly where this is heading, I’ll see if I’m right in the next volume. 

I hope the characters and their relationship will improve going forward, and the revelation at the end does mean I will pick up the next volume but based on this volume alone, if I wanted a popular x shy girl romance I’d just go and read Girl Friends again. 

Ratings:

Art – 7. Perfectly pleasant, and you can clearly see the improvement from The Girl I Want Is So Handsome, although I don’t like Shizuku’s hairstyle. Something about it just bothers me. The cover illustration is lovely. 

Story – 5. It’s been done better before. 

Characters – 6. Kaori has definite potential. Shizuku does too. I really hope they both fulfill it.  

Yuri – 2.  It’s 2 girls ā€œdatingā€, but I wouldn’t call this a lesbian romance. 

Service – Non existent, thankfully.

Boot to the head – 10. All the emotional subtlety of. 

Overall – 6. Stick to writing comedy, sensei.

 

Erica here: Well…yes. I mean, ouch, but yes. I’ve been reading this chapter after chapter in Comic Yuri Hime, and it is…all right. I will say that when it stops being overdramatic about small things there are good moments, but tbh, this series is a generic live-action drama, with hysterics for no reason and the serious things glossed over. The relationship does get better, but the story will not get out of it’s own way, even volumes later.

If you are a sucker for tearful live-action “someone is dying but we can’t tell, because reasons” story, you’ll probably love this. If it is your thing, Volume 2 will be out in December, 2022! Thanks Eleanor for a great review. ^_^

 





Ohana Holoholo, Volume 1 French Edition, Autour d’elles, Guest Review by Fraise

October 19th, 2022

Hello and welcome to Guest Review Wednesday on Okazu! We have a brand new reviewer today and I’m very excited, because she’s reviewing a series that I loved in Japanese, but which has not made it to English. I reviewed the whole series in Japanese here on Okazu and found it complex and compelling. I hope our French-speakers in the audience will pick this series up. The mic is yours, Fraise!

In a few words: I am a historian (M.A.) specialized in popular and scientific representations in media, mainly newspapers. I write mostly non-fiction under my legal name but will occasionally dabble in fiction under my pen name. You can fine me on Twitter @aurantium.

“Loneliness is the human condition. Cultivate it. The way it tunnels into you allows your soul room to grow.  Never expect to outgrow loneliness. Never hope to find people who will understand you, someone to fill that space. An intelligent, sensitive person is the exception, the very great exception. If you expect to find people who will understand you, you will grow murderous with disappointment.”
                                                                                         – Janet Finch, White Oleander

Ā« Rien ne vaut son chez-soi. Ā»
“There’s no place like one’s home.”

During their college years, beautiful, poised Maya and ā€œwild childā€ Michiru were a couple…depending on Michiru’s whims. Small and elusive, Michiru kept throwing herself in anyone’s arms, men and women alike, as if to try and get rid of something by doing so. Nonetheless, she often ended up finding Maya to the point of “squatting” in the same studio as her. Thus continued their strange but peaceful days, until Maya’s disappearance one fateful morning… Only for the woman to reappear five years later on Maya’s doorstep, accompanied by her young son, YĆ»ta. The two women, still attached to each other, decide to live together again, the small makeshift family of three later completed by a fourth member: Nico, an actor with a mysterious connectionand a deep attachment to YĆ»ta. Thus begins a new daily life for each one of them, between work, school, friendship and family.

Thus starts the first volume of Ohana Horohoro (ć‚ŖćƒćƒŠćƒ›ćƒ­ćƒ›ćƒ­), or rather Autour d’elles as it is called in French. A series published in Japan from 2008 to early 2014 inside ShĆ“densha editions’ Feel Young magazine (the same magazine that published Sakurazawa Erica’s Sheets no Sukima, Between the Sheets in English to give an example) and later in six volumes, it was later translated and distributed in French countries from 2020 to 2021 by Akata. A small note for international readers who may not know about the world of French manga publishers: created in 2001 by Dominique VĆ©ret, his wife Sylvie VĆ©ret Chang, Erwan Le Verger and SahĆ© Cibot, Akata is a publisher that, in the last couple of years, has been specializing itself in publishing mangas that deal with various societal topics, from LGBTQ+ topics (Ohana Holoholo, If We Were Adults, Boys Run the Riot) to disabilities (Perfect World, The Sound of my Soul), as well as sexual violence and abuse (Sensei’s Pious Lie). Autour d’elles also serves as the introduction of author Shino Torino to the French-language public, a rather atypical mangaka trying to stay away from formatted magazines so she can keep developing her personal artistic style, and who is recognized in Japan for her way of drawing very human and contemporary characters.

As mentioned before, this series was translated as Autour d’elles in French, which means ā€œAround themā€. And it is indeed a fitting title, for around our main ā€œcoupleā€ gravitates several colorful characters: YĆ»ta, Michiru’s quiet and sensitive young son, who loves pudding, rocks and Giga Rangers; Nico, their womanizing downstairs neighbor, who can be seen almost constantly squatting in their apartment; and finally  Kuwabara ā€œHidesukeā€ Eisuke, an old classmate of Maya that Michiru nicknames ā€œUglysukeā€ (Hideuxsuke in the French text). These three  characters (for now) all exist around the pair, and each are given an agreeable degree of characterization, to the point they seem more like full-fleshed characters in their own right, rather than fodder to help our two heroines develop. This first volume also hints at each of them having their own arc and story, in which Maya and Michiru play a prominent role (YĆ»ta) or a more subtle one (Nico, Hidesuke).

From the get-go, one of the most interesting aspects of this series are the visual. Torino succeeds at creating a unique slice-of-life tone that can mix humor and melancholy in the same page thanks to an intertwined narration (where we follow both the characters’ actions and their thoughts) and using black bands to bring out the thoughts. The backgrounds are detailed, small secondary texts adorn various pages, all seem suit to accompany what can only be described as a rich and rather complex narrative, which manages to hit right in the heart. As for the characters, Torino showcases here multiple warm silhouettes with multiple facial expressions, and with emotions that can be deliciously exaggerated in the funniest of ways. The best examples of this are Nico constantly gagging over YĆ»ta, Michiru’s jealous fit over Maya and Hidesuke reconnecting, and finally YĆ»ta with his bright eyes filled with sparks of wonder when happy, and the sorrow in them when sad.

And yet, in spite of all the gorgeous details, Torino also succeeds at crafting an incredible story, with a very specific topic at its center: family, or rather the (imagined, occasionally dramaticized) reality of a blended family, to which Torino adds an LGBTQ+ element via its heroines, who still love each other without resuming a relationship together (they are just roommates for now, keyword: for now), and who come to occupy both a role of mom to YĆ»ta, with Nico acting as something along the lines of a big brother/friendly uncle. With this first volume, Torino also  shows up the formation of this new unit, as well as its ups and downs, like in any family out there.

And now, it comes down to Maya and Michiru, our main couple… Or rather, duo, for the women have agreed not to resume a relationship.  Although we are told that they used to be together in the past, the first volume shows us exactly why this relationship might have fallen apart, with a Michiru who seems afraid of loneliness and starved for affection, to the point where she literally runs away with YĆ»ta to her  mother’s house the moment she considers that Maya and Hidesuke might start dating after spotting them having a conversation. This all  escalates to an hilarious scene where she takes refuge alongside YĆ»ta at Nico’s apartment, attempting to convince the young man to marry her if Maya decides to go forward with Hidesuke. Needless to say, Nico refuses, for his own reasons and also because he is aware that Michiru is acting on the count of loneliness and despair.

Maya might seem more poised at first sight, the more responsible of the two, yet she has her own demons as well. She does not trust Michiru at all, often acting more like a mother or big sister than a roommate or romantic partner. The first chapter showcases it well, with her literally scolding Michiru for acting up like a child when she throws a tantrum over YĆ»ta and Nico eating her beloved pudding. And yet, she is just as lonely as her roommate, affirming inside her mind that she deserves to be. That Michiru keeps running away from her because she cannot provide the affection the other woman is looking for. It is therefore obvious to the reader that resuming the relationship can only end up in disaster once more, in spite of how much both women want to… Thus giving Torino enough room in the future to develop both characters, and bring them in a position to enter a much healthier relationship with one another than the first

And yet, for now, one cannot help but root for them… And with a scene like the one that closes our first chapter, with both women leaning over each other as the sun rises, who could resist?

Concerning the French edition, the translation from Japanese to French was done by Jordan Sinnes (who also worked on the French language edition of Even Though We’re Adults, also published by Akata) who succeeds in translating, in MoliĆØre’s language, the different atmospheres and emotions of the original Japanese text. The quality of the paper and the printing are also remarkable, despite a couple of pages that are a little transparent. The cover is also very soft to the touch, and this first volumes opens up with a gorgeous first page in full color,
depicting the small family having dinner.

Ratings:

ART – 9 : Shino Torino’s art is incredible, and has been praised in both her native country and in French language press alike. One thing to note, she used to be a chief assistant to her friend Chica Umino (March comes in like a Lion, Honey and Clover), with whom she has collaborated more than once on various fanzines. Thus, many publications cannot help but compare the two, albeit I’d argue both women have distinctive styles.
STORY – 8 : the first volume does an amazing job at establishing the world, the characters, their relationships, and so on, while also establishing the foundation of the main storyline, with Hidesuke’s resurgence in Maya’s life being the trigger.
CHARACTERS – 8 : As mentioned, each character feels rounded, with virtues and flaws alike. An extra point goes to YĆ»ta, who is probably amongst the cutest kids in manga.
SERVICE – 3 : Michiru is shown nude once in a brief moment in the first chapter, and topless multiple times in the first bonus story. Said topless scene includes details such as nipples, but in a non-sexual manner. I’d even argue there is something compelling, even beautiful about her naked half, and Maya seems to agree.
YURI – 8 : Michiru and Maya were a couple once, and the manga explicitly hints at both women’s desire to resume their relationship. As a side-note, Michiru and Maya, as well as Nico are all bisexual, and Nico and Maya are said to have dated both men and women. Maya, for her
part, has chemistry with Hidesuke, and was in a relationship with Michiru before her disappearance.

OVERALL – 8 (puddings out of 10)

Autour d’elles, on Akata’s website (French only):
French edition, on Amazon.fr
French edition, on Amazon.ca
Japanese edition of Ohana HoloHolo (), on Amazon.co.jp

Erica here: A fabulously in-depth review, thank you Fraise! This series really blew me away in Japanese and I am so very excited for French Yuri fans to be able to read it! This has a good old classic 00s Jousei feel and Torino’s art is solid Feel Young gold. Vous ĆŖtes tous tellement chanceux!





My Idol Sits The Next Desk Over Volume 4, Guest Review by Luce

October 12th, 2022
Welcome to another Guest Review Wednesday here on Okazu, featuring the perspective of Luce!
 
Over the course of the first three volumes, we’ve come to know Sakiko, a devoted fan of her favourite idol group Spring Sunshine; Maaya, a possessive fan of the same group; and Chihiro, the favourite idol of both Sakiko and Maaya. We’ve seen Sakiko come out of her shell, Maaya become… well, stay very Maaya, and Chihiro staying on the path of an idol with the support of the other two. Last time, we left on a cliffhanger of sorts, with Sakiko seeing one of the girls who had been somewhat unkind about Chihiro and her boyfriend at a festival at which Spring Sunshine are performing. 
 
In volume 4 of My Idol Sits the Next Seat Over, Sakiko encourages her disparaging classmate to give Spring Shine a watch, and while not converted, she can see that they put a lot of effort in. Chihiro and the group practice for the summer concert, held in an even bigger venue then normal – meaning tough dance routines to learn. We find out a little of Maaya’s home life, and maybe why she’s so… focused on the things she is. Finally, Chihiro and Sakiko plan a surprise for Maaya’s birthday, and Chihiro lands an acting role! 
 
I really liked the storyline with the classmate, and the ending of that – that you can recognise the work that goes into something and respect that without it necessarily being your thing. Her boyfriend was adorable as well. Again, we see that having friends who know and appreciate her idol work is very comforting to Chihiro, who is struggling with the dance routines. This manga is fairly light on the negative aspects of being an idol (although it certainly doesn’t completely shy away from them) but it’s nice to see the background, the hard work that goes into the routines and the staging. I also like how it’s balanced – Chihiro loves her work, but finds some of it difficult and has to work harder at it. 
 
The big thing covered in this volume was Sakiko and Maaya’s relationship. Maybe not when Chihiro is around, but we see Maaya feeling more conflicted about shrugging Sakiko off, and with her backstory, you start to understand somewhat where she’s coming from with her obsessional love of Chihiro. One thing is for sure, and it’s that Maaya needs a better mother than the one she has. She is mellowing a bit though, even though she’d hate anyone to point it out.  
 
This volume also ends on an cliffhanger – a pretty yuri-ish one! Genuinely wasn’t sure how it was going to go, but if you want to find out, volume five is already out! Review upcoming… Eventually. I felt like the Yuri quotient was upped here – Sakiko and Maaya certainly got closer in some aspects. I’m not sure it will actually end up in a romance, but it feels like it’s edging closer that way. We’ll have to see! 
 
Story: 7
Art: 8, it’s bright and sunny, like the subjects
Yuri: a cliffhanger 7…
Overall: 8 
 

If you can forgive Maaya’s worse antics in the first few volumes, especially if you like idols, this is worth getting into.  

Erica here: Thank you Luce for taking the time to keep our attention on this series. I know I appreciate your perspective of the characters dynamics a great deal!





Yoru to Umi, Volume 3 French Edition, Guest Review by Laurent Lignon

September 21st, 2022

Welcome back to Guest Review Wednesday on Okazu, where we welcome back our French language Journaliste/Chroniqueur, Laurent Lignon. Laurent is finishing up this series for u s – don’t miss his reviews of Volume 1 and Volume 2. Please give him your kind attention – the floor is yours, Laurent!

NOTE : this review is based on the French translation of the third and final volume of the series, Yoru to Umi, PlongƩe dans la nuit, released in stores by Taifu Comics http://www.taifu-comics.com/

ā€œI learned the secret to let it go a long while back. If everything I held had to disappear at some point, then I’d be better if I’ve never cherished them in the first place.ā€

A third year has passed for Tsukiko and Aya, and both girls starts to think about what the future will hold for them and their relationship. Aya is sure they’ll keep some sort of contact, despite going to different universities, but has no ideas of what to do with her future life. Tsukiko feels the same, unsure of what she want to do but having already assumed that their relationship will stop when both of them will leave college.

This pushes the story in three different directions.

Aya understands what was already revealed to the reader in the previous volume: the swimming pool in which she spent most of her time is representing her teenage years, and she needs to go out of it and face newer swimming challenges to actually move on in her life. Having understood that, she’ll try to confront her greatest fear: swim into the ocean. And while that first ‘confrontation’ goes as humorously badly as expected, it helps Aya understand that it is time for her to enter adult life and carve her own path. However, she is not ready yet to leave Tsukiko behind.

On the other hand, Tsukiko finally unlocks from her memories the reasons behind her attraction to Aya. And, most importantly, why there is nothing more that she loves than to see Aya swimming. Having understood that, she also finds what her purpose in life will be but comes to the conclusion that her presence will prevent Aya from moving on with a life of her own. Thus, she takes the hard decision to cut the ties gently with Aya.

The third path is, once again, a vision of their relationship through the eyes of a secondary character. This time it is Jƻmonji, a friend of Maihara who hides her own aromanticism behind her only hobby : otome video games. Thus, she is quick to understand the dynamics between Tsukiko and Aya, comparing their roles to characters found in her favorite games while not understanding why none of them goes any further in their relationship.

Goumoto-sensei likes to play with the expectations of her readers. When the separation finally comes, it is with a soft wind and not a storm. This is done with the perfect level of emotional writing, and Tsukiko is clearly written as aromantic despite liking the time she spends with Aya. This looks like a bittersweet ending, but then the epilogue (with its brilliant humorous double plot twist) gives us everything we hoped to see while respecting the personality of each of the characters. This is complemented by a bonus chapter, which takes place after the epilogue, and which shows how much each of them has matured, with Tsukiko doing something she has never done before for anyone else.

This is the story of a different type of love, one that isn’t based on romantic or sexual elements. An aromantic story ? Perhaps, at least from Tsukiko’s point of view. But as Aya said as the final word in the book, finally acknowledging and understanding how each woman feels about the other :

ā€œThis distance between us is our bond.ā€

ART – 9 : as usual, some magnificent backgrounds especially in the epilogue
STORY – 8 : a different Yuri, yet a beautiful if unusual story
CHARACTERS – 8 : this is good to see both girls mature and understand what must be done to move on. But once again, there are barely any secondary characters save JĆ»monji.
SERVICE – 1 : swimsuits, mostly
YURI – 8

OVERALL – 8

Erica here: Well, that ending sounds like it’s worth reading! I’ll have to take a look at this. This manga IS licensed in English as The Evening and the Sea by Houbunsha through the MangaPlaza manga platform.Maybe I’ll give this a chance to test out the platform. ^_^

Thanks so much Laurent!

 
 




Otherside Picnic Manga, Volume 2 Guest Review by Sandy F

August 31st, 2022

Welcome to another Guest Review Wednesday on Okazu! Today we welcome back Sandy F, for continuing coverage on the Otherside Picnic manga from Square Enix. Please give him your kind attention and take it away, Sandy!

After quite a wait we have Volume 2 of the manga version of Otherside Picnic, with the conclusion of ā€˜Surviving the Eight-Foot-Tall Lady’, a large chunk of ā€˜Station February’ and a bonus original story ā€˜Late-night Chicken and a Gorilla’. It is worth the wait. I wonder if it this volume should have been titled ā€˜Out of the Frying Pan into the Fire’ as we follow Sorawo and Toriko surviving by the skin of their teeth. They celebrate their survival but afterwards wander into more trouble where they confront different Otherside Entities and just as dangerous, stranded US marines.

In ā€˜Late-night Chicken and a Gorilla’ Kozakura muses on how the mirror cube offers a different perspective on how to perceive the world, and I find that the manga does something similar in how it tells the story of the Otherside when compared with the novels. For example, in the novels everything is told from Sorawo’s perspective and her responses to what is happening around her. However, in the manga although Sorawo is the narrator, through the artwork we don’t have to rely upon her perception of what is going on. So, we witness Toriko’s growing feelings for Sorawo that challenges Sorawo’s ā€˜why would Toriko want to be with me’ mode.

The artwork continues to be effective in conveying why I enjoy this series so much. The ability to shift from the goofiness that is Toriko, the sullenness that is Sorawo to the insanity inducing visions of the Otherside is amazing. The artist does a wonderful job of conveying the ā€˜bloody hell’ moment when Sorawo and Toriko realise that they have unexpectedly arrived in the Otherside at night-time.There are some neat moments when we see Sorawo and Toriko strengthen their bonds as accomplices both in enjoying a drinking party and the terrors of the Otherside.

With ā€˜Late-night Chicken and a Gorilla’ we hear Kozakura’s voice. From wondering why she ate so much KFC, to an analysis of her thoughts on the nature of the mirror cube and what can she do about those meddlesome kids Toriko and Sorawo who are intruding in her life. With this story we see glimpses of Kozakura as a more complicated person than, for the most part, we see in the main novels.
All in all, a great read and now the wait begins for the next volume.

Story – 9
Artwork 9
Character – 8
Service – 4
Yuri – 5

Overall – 9

Erica here: Thank you Sandy! From my perspective what makes the manga so worth my time is that the art is quite good at capturing the qualities that make the Otherside creepy or scary, while also showing us the still-inexplicable, (sometimes less terrifying, occasionally more,) things that Sorawo can see with her blue eye. This adds an extra layer of confusion and fear to every story without being gross or, as the anime played it, boo!-scary.

I especially like the conclusion to the Eight-Foot Tall Lady story. That has stuck with me since I read it the first time. It’s going to have repercussions for volumes to come. The art here really captures the sights and feel of the Otherside in a way the LN art really had no chance to do. Looking forward to Volume 3, which will be heading our way in December!