Watashi ha Ongaku de Naguritai: Band Yuri Novel (わたしは音楽で殴りたい: バンド百合小説) by Yuruico Vraisravana is the very last item I picked up in February 2019 when I was in Japan for Comitia that was left unread. And now, more than 2 years later – it has been read!

Novels are slow going for me, simply as a matter of circumstance. I do my reading at night before bed and my eyes are already tired from the day. A few pages at a time is about all I can manage. And this novel is nearly 400 pages long. At least it wasn’t in a teeny-tiny font. ^_^

The story follows Nagi, a young woman who is at loose ends. She’s graduated high school and is in university, but is sort of floating aimlessly with no particular desire. Her lover is a teacher with whom she has had a relationship since middle school and if that wasn’t enough to make you hate Sensei, they are also a complete jerk to Nagi as a matter of course.

One day, Nagi meets Mare, an old schoolmate. Mare is on the way to a live show and invites Nagi along…and Nagi’s life is completely changed. Although she doesn’t “understand” rock and roll, she’s rendered helpless as Chimera sings from the stage about how life has no meaning. At the end of the show, Mare finds Nagi on the floor, her eyes filled with tears. Mare takes Nagi to a karaoke room and there, discovers Nagi has a great voice. Once again Mare invites Nagi out – this time to audition with her band, Asiatic Hybrid (which, by the way, is the name of a lily.)

The bulk of the story involves Nagi and the band adjusting to one another. Nagi is sleeping with Yomi, the drummer and band leader, but she’s running after the girl with black hair, Chimera. The band struggles to find their sound. Toa, on bass, seems detached a lot of the time, Mare is starting to sound jealous of Nagi’s increasing influence and Yomi and Nagi are maybe more serious than they are admitting. When Nagi asks to write the lyrics to their next song, things come to a head with Mare. Mare and Nagi spend an all-nighter confiding secrets and working on their song – together.

Nagi tries to find her sound and to understand rock and roll. As the big contest is upon them Chimera dissolves her band. When Nagi tracks them down and demands to know why, they say that it’s just time. She’ll have one chance and one chance only to beat Chimera. Chi, the girl with black hair, signals her support and Nagi and the band go out and kill it.

The book wraps up with Nagi and Yomi rededicating themselves to studies, the band continuing to play and Yomi and Nagi admitting that they love one another.

When I got the book, I also had received a mini disk with the band’s song. I had very clear idea of what I thought the band members looked like as I read this book, and when I finally watched the music video for their single…this was not it. ^_^ But it was fun to see this and now you too can see Asiatic Hybrid and listen to their single, Recollection:

I was surprised that Nagi was a soprano. I don’t know why, really. There’s also a lovely little voiced promo which nails what I imagined as Yomi’s voice.

Ratings:

Art – Not in the book, but the videos, and while nice, not the image I had at all.
Story – Not bad.
Characters – Totally worked, no one that felt out of place
Service – Gonna call Sensei on this. Yuck
Yuri – Yomi and Nagi were a boot I was waiting to see drop. It never did, for which I was glad

Overall – Solid 7

Honestly, it wasn’t a bad novel at all, just needed a bit of editing in places. As a purchase at Comitia, two thumbs up from me and I’ll borrow a thumb for giving out the companion CD as well. Yuri girls band story with a happy ending, plus media mix for the win. This novel is available on JP Kindle, or from Melonbooks, and you can download the song, Recollection for free from Booth.pm. Melonbooks also has a some of Yuruico’s other publications, or you can check them out on Pixiv.

This is kind of a long review for a doujinshi novel…but it took me 2 years to read it, I’m gonna talk about it a bit.

This story begins somewhere in the middle of itself. I was online one day and saw an announcement for the 2nd Yuri Literary Short Story Contest on Pixiv, co-sponsored by Comic Yuri Hime. I bookmarked the contest site to read the stories and went on my merry way. In the middle of doing something else I suddenly thought, “WAIT! The 2nd Contest?” How did I miss that there was a first contest?!? I guess the first one wasn’t as big as the Second and Third versions were. You can see the larger list of sponsors on the contest sites.

In 2019, you may remember that I took a group of folks to Tokyo on the 100th Anniversary of Yuri Tour. At the end of that, I took a day to go back to a few places I hadn’t spent enough money time at. One of those places was the Shosen Book Tower in Akihabara. It has one of the  one of the best Yuribu, which contains manga and mooks and artbooks…and that year it had the subject of today’s review, the winners of the contest. It has taken me this long to read it, but the Yuri Bungei Shousetsu Contest Selection 2019 (百合文芸小説 コンテスト セレクション) is genuinely some of the most original work I have ever read in a short story collection. Sadly, this volume does not seem to be available online, but you can read the winners on the Pixiv site.

To be clear, I don’t like every story in this collection, but the stories I read are honestly so original that I’m excited to be talking about  this volume. I’ve written before about my contentious relationship with short story collections, so you might understand my delight at reading a book that is filled with things I have not read before! 

As I’m reading through the stories, I’m making notes on what the stories I enjoyed are about, or I absolutely would forget. The first story has a girl overhearing another girl’s confession to the girl she likes and a heartfelt conversation between them after that. A body swap story that wasn’t creepy, two women who meet at a flea market, a bunch of girls trying to make an aphrodisiac, two young women who meet on the train (trust me, it isn’t totally unoriginal), two girls who attempt to find students who have gone missing.

My so-far favorite is a wonderful story about the time in 1999 when the demons opened up portals to come to our world and sparked a “spot game” for humans to find those portals…and the tourist trade between the worlds. Our protagonist ends up having an overnight adventure in a mall with an elf girl she sees in the mall food court. Everything about this story was just fantastic, from the voice of the narrator, to the matter-of-fact world building. “Shopping Mall no Eruko to Watashi” by Pickles Ginger (ショッピングモールのえる子と私。 – ピクルズジンジャー), can still be read on Pixiv, and I recommend it for the sheer pleasure of reading a great short story. ^_^

Now that I have read most of this book, I’m genuinely looking forward to reading the next collection, Yuri Bungei Shousetsu Contest Selection 2 (百合文芸小説コンテストセレクション2) which is available on the Booth.pm store for Pixiv (or, possibly if it is on the shelves at Shosen, when I finally get back to Japan!)

Ratings:

Overall – 8

I’m so pleased at the originality of these writers and hope to see more of them in the future.

In 2019, Japan’s premier science fiction magazine, SF Magazine launched a special Yuri issue. It was an immediate best-seller and legitimized Yuri science fiction as a subgenre.  Following that issue, Hayakawa Publishing put out a volume of short stories that included the stories from that issue. Asterism ni Hanataba o Yuri SF Anthology (アステリズムに花束を 百合 SFアンソロジー) is that short story collection.

If you’ve been following me on social media, you know it has taken me approximately 3 months to read this book. This is not because the book was in any way specific way bad, but merely because, as I do most of my reading before bed, the combination of science fiction and/or horror in a language I can’t yet claim as my second, meant I was going slowly.  In the end, I am actually glad I made it all the way through. But if I were to ever revisit it, I would read the first two and last two stories only.

The back of the book begins with a definition of the term Yuri as a genre term. Hayakawa is using a broad stroke definition, much as we do at Yuricon. “[Intense] Relationships between women.” Which means that some of these stories might not fall under what you might consider “Yuri.” More damning, from my perspective, is that several of the stories didn’t fall under what I consider to be science fiction; for instance the one about a girl’s school for blood-sucking (not vampire) demons. Even stories I actually liked, I was often hard pressed to see them as both Yuri and science fiction, including my favorite story of the collection…and they often had other problems as well.

Of the four stories I liked, “49 Letters” by Morita Kisetsu had impressed me a great deal in the magazine. Sweet, melancholy, Yuri and SF, it was a great little, if sad, entry about communication with the afterlife. I enjoyed the opening story by Iori Miyazawa (creator of Otherside Picnic), “Kimi no Scope” but still, having read it twice now, fail to see it as Yuri. The last person on earth follows footsteps. 

The next to last story, “Colorless Green” by Riku Shuusa and Inamura Bungo was a great story about an intense relationship between women and had some great science fiction elements, but would, if ever adapted, instantly become a mediocre murder mystery. I would have love to seen that edited to be a bit more about Monica. The story was less “intense relationships between women” and more “relationships with an intense woman.”  But is had great linguistics stuff about AI and human communication. The final story, “Twin Star Cyclone Runway” was an excellent bit of science fiction world-building and was totally Yuri (if a little handwave-y) but then it included the new disgusting fetish fad in manga, kissing someone who has just thrown up and gleefully exclaiming “You taste like puke!” and I am already very done with this and do not need to ever see it again. The story had a Thelma and Louise vibe that suited it.

I was very glad to have read this collection – I’m super pleased  to see SF Yuri and…I’d also like to see it grow the fuck up a bit. ^_^ 

Ratings:

Overall – 6

I look forward to the 2nd Special Yuri issue.

If you’ve read any of this, I’d love to hear your thoughts.