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The Summer You Were There, Volume 1, Guest Review by Eleanor W

November 16th, 2022

It’s Guest Review Wednesday here on Okazu and I am so delighted to welcome back Eleanor once again. Today she’s going to take a look at Yuama’s dramatic school life series. Take it away, Eleanor, and I’ll be back at the end. 
It’s nice to be back again. This is my 3rd review for Okazu, and I’m finally reviewing a manga volume this time. I’ve reviewed the British Museum’s manga exhibition and a yuri visual novel called Perfect Gold. You can find me on Twitter (for now) @st_owly and the same on Instagram.

Having loved the author’s previous work The Girl I Want Is So Handsome, I was excited to check out their new series, The Summer You Were There, Volume 1. First thing to note is that Seven Seas have done a lovely job on the cover of the English release. I really like the water bubbles and the falling paper in the background of the illustration, and the title itself is embossed which is a nice touch. Unfortunately, the contents don’t really hold up so well in comparison. I’m not the biggest fan of “let’s pretend to date each other, teehee” stories at the best of times, and this one hasn’t exactly converted me.

The story starts like this: your typical bookworm (Shizuku) encounters a popular girl (Kaori) who for some unknown reason, wants to date her. Kaori finds Shizuku’s super secret discarded novel manuscript which no one is ever supposed to read (why would you throw it in the bin at school then??) so of course the two of them start “dating” because Kaori strong arms Shizuku into it, and the excuse is “I want to help you research material for your next story.”

“If you want to make your ‘dying of high school manga disease’ plotline land emotionally, maybe don’t telegraph it with the subtlety of a boot to the head.” I couldn’t have put this better myself, thank you Toukochan on the Okazu Discord server for letting me use this magnificent line. I didn’t find either of them particularly endearing individually, and by the end of the book I still didn’t particularly care for them as a couple either.

Having said that, chapter 3 was by far my favourite of the book. The girls end up going to the library together and actually start genuinely bonding over favourite books and authors. I wish more of the book had been like this, and I hope there’s more of this going forward. The obligatory yuri aquarium date in the next 2 chapters just didn’t land the same way. 

I would like to know more about Kaori’s motivations and why she wants to date Shizuku. At the end of the book Shizuku confesses something big to her, and she says she already knows everything. I suspect I know exactly where this is heading, I’ll see if I’m right in the next volume. 

I hope the characters and their relationship will improve going forward, and the revelation at the end does mean I will pick up the next volume but based on this volume alone, if I wanted a popular x shy girl romance I’d just go and read Girl Friends again. 

Ratings:

Art – 7. Perfectly pleasant, and you can clearly see the improvement from The Girl I Want Is So Handsome, although I don’t like Shizuku’s hairstyle. Something about it just bothers me. The cover illustration is lovely. 

Story – 5. It’s been done better before. 

Characters – 6. Kaori has definite potential. Shizuku does too. I really hope they both fulfill it.  

Yuri – 2.  It’s 2 girls “dating”, but I wouldn’t call this a lesbian romance. 

Service – Non existent, thankfully.

Boot to the head – 10. All the emotional subtlety of. 

Overall – 6. Stick to writing comedy, sensei.

 

Erica here: Well…yes. I mean, ouch, but yes. I’ve been reading this chapter after chapter in Comic Yuri Hime, and it is…all right. I will say that when it stops being overdramatic about small things there are good moments, but tbh, this series is a generic live-action drama, with hysterics for no reason and the serious things glossed over. The relationship does get better, but the story will not get out of it’s own way, even volumes later.

If you are a sucker for tearful live-action “someone is dying but we can’t tell, because reasons” story, you’ll probably love this. If it is your thing, Volume 2 will be out in December, 2022! Thanks Eleanor for a great review. ^_^

 





Hana Monogatari, Volume 1 (はなものがたり)

November 13th, 2022

Hana Monogatari, Volume 1 (はなものがたり) by shwinn, is one of my new favorite series ever.

Hanayo’s husband has been dead for 49 days, so her mourning period is over…but she has no idea where to begin, really. She’s elderly and her husband was clingy when he was well, and then needed so much of her time and energy when he became sick…. She starts by taking a walk through town, where she discovers a small cosmetics store with a saleslady who is of an age with her and extremely stylish and attractive. When she gets home, she find that her own makeup collection is old, so she steels herself to go to this store and talk to the sales lady, Yoshiko.

Yoshiko brings with her a renewed interest in life not just for Hanayo, but to all the women who come in to her store. She *wants* people to feel and look good and be happy and do creative things. She breathes life into the older women of town, and gleefully centers herself in a circle of creative, independent women.

Yoshiko encourages Hanayo to build a new life… and she’s not at all shy about pointing out that Hanayo has a lot more to mourn for than just the passing of a husband: shes been largely robbed of her own life. Hanayo starts thinking about herself in a way that could not have happened when the resources of her family went to her younger brother and then her time and energy were spent on her husband and children. With the help of her granddaughter – who is the first one to say out loud that Hanayo seems to be crushing on Yoshiko – she takes tentative steps to a whole new life.

When Yoshiko and Hanayo go out on a date, Hanayo is introduced to a lesbian couple and suddenly, she’s rethinking everything she ever knew about …everything.

I cannot express how wonderful this book is.

Schwinn’s art is stylish and cute in turn, with the occasional missed proportions that lets you know this person is still growing as an artist.  The story is outstanding. As we learn about Hanayo’s husband, it was pretty hard for me to not be kind of annoyed at him, and when Yoshiko was like oh fuck this guy, it felt pretty cathartic. ^_^ We, the reader, can see that Yoshiko is gay, and has had a long-term relationship, but Hanayo has not quite gotten it…and let me tell you Yoshiko isn’t hiding all that hard, either.

Also perfect is Riko-chan, Hanayo’s daughter who begins the story by saying it’s been 49 days, time to do something…maybe look for a new love.  When Hanayo and she meet while Hanayo is shopping for a new dress, Riko volunteers to help and nails it. She also is wonderfully encouraging when Hanayo tells her the whole story.

I should also mention that the name of this series isn’t just meant as a nod to Yoshiya Nobuko’s influential series…the book itself appears in the story, beginning with the story ‘Sweet Pea,’ which was a pretty Yuri-ish triangle story about three girls. Yoshiko lends Hanayo the book and says that that one is her favorite. I have some thoughts about this, but I want to see if other stories have a place in this series, as well.

Ratings:

Art – 7 Nice, with some great moments.
Story – 10 I cannot wait for each chapter to come out on Comic Walker
Characters – 10 Fully formed, decent, and likeable
Service – 0 salaciousness, 10 empowerment
LGBTQ+- 9
Yuri – 6  Hanayo is seriously crushing on Yoshiko and it looks like the feeling is mutual

Overall – 10

A lovely Yuri romance about senior women that focuses on them finding their realest selves, surrounding themselves with people of creative skill and drive. Lesbians with a social circle of other lesbians that isn’t just “a bar scene.” This is everything. What a great manga.  I would love to see it licensed. I’ll start writing to Yen Press now. ^_^





Odoriba ni Skirt ga Naru, Volume 2 (踊り場にスカートが鳴る)

November 9th, 2022

In Volume 1, we met Kiki, a young woman who dreams of being the following partner in ballroom dance, but due to her height, is always assumed to be lead, and Michiru, a diminutive, but forceful young lady who wants to be Kiki’s lead.

In Odoriba ni Skirt ga Naru, Volume 2 (踊り場にスカートが鳴る) the two are still working out exactly what their partnership will look like. But in the meantime, they have their first test competition to get through – which does not go all that smoothly. Michiru passes out after they clear their test.

While they try to build something more stable between them at the dance club’s training camp, we turn our eyes towards Kiki’s former partner, Shion. She and Kiki are able to repair their fractured friendship and Kiki is finally able to step up and take Michiru’s hand fully as a dance partner. But she’s taken by surprise when Michiru asks if they couldn’t form a deeper relationship to make their partnership work. What if they pretend to be a couple…?

In a magnificent climax for the volume, the two open their hearts and begin to dance. They count the waltz steps and come together in a beautiful sequence.

This series is a surprisingly realistic look at the interior lives of young women. The drama is small and personal. No hysterics, no dramatics, but there is deep passion for ballroom dance (and what it means to be part of the Quadrille) and a wholly relatable struggle with being an adolescent girl.

Ratings:

Art – 9
Story – 8
Characters – 9
Yuri – Bumping it up to 2
Service – Nope

Overall – 9

This is, IMHO, a sleeper hit of the year. It won’t take over Times Square, but I have a warm place for it in my heart and really hope to see it in English!





Cats and Sugar Bowls

November 8th, 2022

If you have picked up a Yuri Anthology in the past several years, you may well have encountered a story by Yukiko. This collection of several of Yukiko’s short stories from Seven Seas looks sweet, but right from the beginning, the claws are out. Cats and Sugar Bowls is a 18+ collection which includes BDSM and related fetishes. Content notes: A few of the stories are quite violent, others focus on other forms of domination and a few are rather sweet, depending on the anthology for which the story was written.

Overall, this collection is not my jam, but I would not hesitate to recommend it to someone who liked stories about dom/sub women. The art is surprisingly shoujo-like; characters tend towards cute rather than stylish. One of the strongest qualities of this volume is the characters themselves. The couples actually like one another and the partnerships seem to be based on mutual consent and attraction.

My favorite story is the final one, which was written for Cinnamon: Demihuman x Human Yuri anthology ( シナモン 人外×人間百合アンソロジー)  from Kadokawa, that pairs a priestess and a mountain god in a surprisingly gentle story.

Great job on the translation/adaptation, which manages to be sensitive and straightforward, without making anything here feel uncomfortable (there’s nothing worse than a translator whose discomfort is palpable in a translation of BDSM and yes, I have read some of those.) So thanka to Amber Tamosaitas and Asha Bardon. James Dashiell’s lettering is solid and supportive and, where it can be, is retouching, rather than just adding glosses to s/fx. It looks so much better that way. Beautiful cover design by H. Qi. And thank you to all the editors and proofreaders and technical folks that made this a smooth reading experience.

Ratings:

Art – 8
Stories – Not to *my* taste, but you may love them
Characters – 8 They know who they are
Service – Whether you consider adult exploration of domination or pain “fanservice” is up to you. But there is little salaciousness. Let’s split it down the middle at a 5
Yuri – 8

Overall  – 8

If you’re looking for something adult that isn’t all panty shots and lowest common denominator, why not give this volume a try.





SHWD (シュード), Volume 2

November 2nd, 2022

In Volume 1, we met Kouga, a new recruit to the Fukuoka branch of the Special Hazardous Waste Disposal team – an elite force that fights Dynamis, inhuman beings that poison human minds and drive people mad. Kouga is taken under the wing of Sawada, a jaded veteran with a mysterious (to us) past. SHWD (シュード), Volume 2 begins with our two large, muscular women, training…hard. When they take a break, we can see the beginnings of something building between them.

But the bulk of the book follows our cover couple – team leader Nonaka and the American transfer, Leone. Leo and Nonaka have worked together before and understand each other’s weaknesses and strengths. When Leo breaks down, Nonaka is there to stop her from causing herself a harm, and when Nonaka allows the Dynamis influence in her to get too strong, Leo offers her her body to consume while she’s taken into custody. We get Nonaka’s tragic backstory. The two of them have a deep relationship that, by the end of the volume, they tentatively allow to become something more.  They obviously understand one another.

The volume then turns back to Kouga and Sawada. Sawada mentions that different levels of access are given different colors in SHWD. But Kouga notices that Sawada is given a security clearance color that isn’t on the list. When Sawada returns from a disposal, Kouga is sure that she sees a Dynamis draped over Sawada’s head…but a second later, it’s gone and Sawada looks the same as usual. Who…or what…is Sawada?

This a solid action series, with powerful backstories and a pretty thin plot so far. One hopes that it will be given time to develop, so we get a current timeline story along with the puzzle pieces of the backstories. I just hope it doesn’t devolve into break up the team/get the team back together/the end. Here’s hoping this series gets the time it needs to work itself through.

As I said in Volume 1, “this series is a love letter to huge, muscular woman. ” Kouga, Sawada and Leo are massive, muscular body types and Nonaka is – for story reasons, of course – an adult in a child’s body.  There is some very mild nudity, but the service is muscled arms, torsos and legs. Not to everyone’s taste, but I find it a refreshing change of pace from willowy women.

Ratings:

Art – 8 Honestly great, despite kind of being exaggerated in a bunch of different ways.
Story – 7 Solid action story storytelling
Characters – 8 Tragic backstories ahoy!
Service – 5 Anatomy is fun
Yuri – Both couples are taking tentative steps forward, one more tentative than the other

Overall – 8

Volume 1 is available in English from Seven Seas!