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The Flower Princess of Sylph

March 5th, 2025

A glowing butterfly illuminates lush red roses, and two women's faces. A woman with pale hair, her eyes closed, and a woman wearing a head band/wimple over her dark hair.by Patricia Baxter, Guest Reviewer

A new king has been crowned in the Kingdom of the Wind: Princess Natalia, the final member of the royal family. While Natalia is determined to stand tall and do right by the people of her kingdom, the reality is significantly more difficult, as she has lost her brother, Louis the previous King, and their father, the King before both of them, in quick succession. To make matters worse, the wind sword, Sylphide, no longer seems to work as it is meant to, causing Natalia to feel like an insufficient ruler, with no one to turn to in her immense grief. As she grants herself a moment alone to mourn, an unexpected figure steps forward to offer support: Sister Sara, a nun of the Petal Convent.

Kamejiro’s The Flower Princess of Sylph is a series made with a great deal of forethought and care, as the author has showcased a commitment to plotting a world of wind and flowers. Their worldbuilding has a strong foundation, slowly introducing more information on the Sylph, their royal descendants, the magic blade Sylphide, and Sara’s unusual connection to them as the story progresses. The architecture and clothing of the people in the world are adorned in various floral and plant motifs, showing a visual commitment to the world they created. My favourite detail is that each chapter in the series is named after a flower or plant, and the events that play out in each chapter align with their symbolic meanings in the flower languages of Europe and North America. All of these choices show a degree of care and craftsmanship that is deeply admirable.

The fact that Kamejiro does not shy away from Natalia’s intense grief is another aspect of this series that I also greatly appreciate. It can be very tempting to push a character, especially a protagonist, towards recovering from mental health problems as quickly as possible for the sake of the overall narrative, but that is not the case here. Instead, the current plot of The Flower Princess of Sylph is focused on Natalia’s gradual recovery, and that this will be a slow, ongoing process throughout the course of the series.

That being said, even a well plotted story is not immune to a few quirks and criticisms. The art is generally impressive, especially when Natalia cuts loose with her powers of the Sylph, but there are some instances where the art can feel a bit rough. Additionally, while most of the gags are funny and well-paneled, certain jokes, like Natalia accidentally hurting herself in her stubbornness, become less grimly humorous and more frustrating and concerning by the fifth chapter. 

Sara is also a character that will probably be rather polarizing for some readers. On the one hand, she is an intriguing character who hides her true intentions and cunning behind a facade of carelessness, but on the other hand her attempts to cheer up the princess can feel a bit jarring and tactless. Considering one of the ongoing mysteries of the series is Sara’s connection to the Sylphide, your opinion on her character may be a deciding factor in whether or not you wish to continue reading the series.

Overall, The Flower Princess of Sylph is a well-crafted fantasy yuri series with plenty of room to grow. A lot of seeds have been planted, including the lilies, but only time will tell what this manga will eventually blossom into.

The series is available on most major electronic reading platforms, such as Global BookWalker, with chapters available for individual purchase. The first chapter is free and the subsequent chapters are 1.99 USD each.

Ratings:

Art: 7.5
Story: 6.5 (good worldbuilding, but the plot itself is rather thin right now)
Characters: 7 (only Natalia and Sara are given any focus so far)
Service: 0 (unless you have a thing for nuns, which would bump the rating up significantly)
Yuri: 2 (only begins to sprout during the fifth chapter)

Overall: 7.5





Becoming a Princess Knight and Working at a Yuri Brothel, Volume 1

January 22nd, 2025

A blonde woman with extremely large breasts that spill over the top of a leather corset, her gauntleted hands tied above her head to a sword on her back, kneels on the ground wearing leather garters and stockings over visible underwear in a medieval-type street. 4 women behind her regard her with differing expressions: ignoring, glaring, smiling and saluting.Guest Review by Paul S. Enns, Guest Reviewer

Becoming a Princess Knight and Working at a Yuri Brothel, Volume 1, by Hinaki, has a better story than you’d expect.

It’s a mashup of isekai , yuri, and gender bender. Like many isekai stories, there are some RPG-like elements dropped in for doing tasks and gaining ranks. It’s easy to consider these elements as part of the main character’s imagination.

Every character name has been translated into Latin, and provides an additional level of interest/humor. I will provide translations into English in parentheses after the first use of their name.

Lillion (lily) herself/himself is our protagonist. The soul of about-to-die, 38-year-old Naruse Soushi is thrust into the about-to-die body of Princess Reina (queen). Instead of the defiant, not-afraid-to-die Reina, it’s now the quite-afraid-to-die Soushi who begs to live. This is granted and she (the pronoun I will use to refer to Soushi-in-Reina’s body) is sold to a brothel. The brothel’s Madam, Acanthus (genus acanthus are plants with spiny or toothed leaves), renames Reina as Lillion for the duration of her stay.

Given it’s in the title, no surprise, the brothel services only women. Lillion tries to adjust.

Lillion provides most of the humor, thanks to Soushi being inside. Soushi also allows Lillion to endure the many humiliations Princess Reina wouldn’t be expected to get through. Or would Reina be able to endure these? We can’t know. It’s part of the problematic nature of the character.

I can’t really fault Lillion for the actions she takes in the book. Trying to get along in a new world, she is doing the best she can.

Who I can find extreme fault with is Precarie (precariously), the one who removed Reina’s soul and grabbed a random soul from another world to replace it. What is Precarie’s endgame here? What happened to Reina’s soul? Why is Precarie so interested in Lillion when Precarie knows that Reina isn’t in there? Too many unanswered questions.

After Lillion deals with Lady of the Moon (I’m disappointed this wasn’t translated to Domina Lunae), Precarie, and Alsea (sea), she faces the threat of Lapis Rufus (red stone, or ruby, associated with love and passion), Captain of the Vigilante Corps.

I’ve summarized enough and will stop, except to say that it doesn’t have an end and goes right into Volume 2.

While I have a problem with all of the characters, the world building done for this captured my interest. Hinaki obviously has a destination in mind for these characters, and has created a world to tell an interesting story. Just with lots of sex.

By accepting the premise, you accept the level of service. It’s part of the plot.

Translation is well done. Making all proper nouns into Latin words was a fun addition.

Ratings:

Art — 8 I can tell every character apart, and it has well done backgrounds.
Story — 8 Held my interest the whole time.
Characters — 4 Problematic, especially Precarie.
Service — 7 for how explicit it is, 10 for how much there is.
Yuri — 9 It gets a point knocked off for Lillion being occupied by a guy’s soul.

Overall — 7

This was way more entertaining than I expected it to be. I’m going to continue reading this story. Volumes 2 and Volume 3 are already available, Volume 4 releases March 4, 2025.





Yuri Game Jam 2024 Review

December 25th, 2024

Logo for the itch.io Yuri Game Jam 2024, featuring a brown-skinned angel with orange pony tails, black wings on her back and off the front of her head, wearing a pink crop top that reads "girl kisser" and an unzipped orange jacket.By Patricia Baxter, Guest Reviewer

With a whopping 110 entries, from full games to demos, the 2024 Yuri Game Jam was a smashing success both for the developers who participated and fans of the genre looking for new video games to play. With so many intriguing games to choose from, it can be overwhelming to know what kinds of games are available and what to expect from each title.

While I have admittedly only scratched the surface of the types of games on this massive list, the games I have already played were extremely impressive, whether it is for their unique approaches to the yuri genre, clever writing, distinctive art style, creative game design, or some combination therein. Here are six games, five full games and one demo, that caught my eye from this year’s Yuri Game Jam.

 

A Witch is Getting Married by FeatherBoy

Content Warnings: Depictions of anxiety and complicated relationships

Available for: The three major PC operating systems

A Witch is Getting Married follows the life of a witch named Thyme, who finds herself gradually drifting apart from her best friend, Safflower, who she may or may not have a crush on, after said friend gets a new boyfriend. With gorgeous visuals and grounded dialogue, this game covers the topic of losing connections with the people you love with a great deal of care, while not glossing over the ugly emotions and anxieties that come with it.

Art: 10
Story: 9
Characters: 9
Service: 1 (optional flirtatious dialogue during dream sequences)
Yuri: 3 – 6 (players can choose to depict Thyme’s feeling for Safflower as romantic or platonic) 

Overall: 9

 

Bridgewater Deeproot Access Radio (Demo) by Runa Liore

Content Warnings: Disturbing/scary stories from the callers, one caller being a massive creep (misogyny, stalking, trespassing)
Available for: The three major PC operating systems

A new demo from the developer of 77 Oleander Avenue Ghost House Investigation, which I reviewed for Okazu last year, Bridgewater Deeproot Access Radio follows Reb Wychwood the co-host of a paranormal radio show, where she sits opposite of her sceptical co-host, Zinnia Braxton, as they take in listener’s calls and unsubtly flirt with each other. Each story presented in the demo is given a great deal of polish in terms of their visuals and sound design, which makes me excited to see what we will experience in the full game, scheduled for release next year.

Art: 10 (various art styles used for each story in the anthology)
Story: 10
Characters: 10 (realistic personalities, for better and for worse)
Service: 1 (some flirting)
Yuri: 7 (Reb is more than fond of Zinnia, but we only see hints that it’s reciprocated in the demo) 

Overall: 10

 

Come Towards Me by snixiy

Content Warnings: Non-explicit nudity & sensuality, description of missing body parts from past injuries, past character death
Available for: The three major PC operating systems

It’s a common tale: a woman wanders into the woods at night despite the repeated warnings from her community, compelled by an unseen force. But even familiar stories can feel fresh and rejuvenated, when designed with such love and care as Come Towards Me. The developer’s creative approach to graphic design, and ability to build up a foreboding atmosphere, have deeply impressed me, and it makes me curious to see what they will make next.

Art: 6 for imagery (number of images in the game can be counted on one hand, and they are intentionally obscured), 8 for font and overall graphic design
Story: 7.5
Characters: 7
Service: 6 (gets very close to sexually explicit near the end)
Yuri: 9

Overall: 7.5

 

Mechanical Relations by gaybreast

Content Warnings: Explicit sexual content, minigames that simulate sexual foreplay, temporary loss of a limb for a robot character, flashing images, shaking images
Available for: The three major PC operating systems, also playable on web browsers

This game is meant for adult players aged 18 and older. Mechanical Relations is a completely different game from the rest of the titles on this list, being an adventure game built in RPG Maker, rather than a visual novel. Marmalade and Fritter are two girlfriends who find themselves stranded on a moon after a delivery goes wrong. Thankfully they are safe and are able to “unwind” together. A game that is both cute and sexy, this is recommended for players looking for gay robot sex featuring endearing characters.

Art: 10
Story: 6 (admittedly not a lot of plot)
Characters: 10
Service: 10
Yuri: 10 

Overall: 10

 

The end of an obsession by ebi-hime

Content Warnings: Blood, stabbing, murder, kidnapping, toxic co-dependency, manipulation, gaslighting
Available for: The three major PC operating systems and Android

The most intense game on the list, The end of an obsession is a grim fairytale for those who enjoy twists and discussions about the nature of stories. That being said, the major caveat with this game is that in order to fully appreciate and understand it you need to play the developer’s previous title, It gets so lonely here, first, but both games are more than worth the experience thanks to their excellent writing, visuals, and sound design.

Art: 10
Story: 10
Characters: 7
Service: 1 (any physical activity between the leads feels squeamish and coercive, which is intentional)
Yuri: 4 (YMMV depending on how you perceive their dynamic by the end of the game) 

Overall: 8.5

 

To Constrict And To Suffocate by peridon

Content Warnings: Obsessive behaviour, background character death and suicide
Available for: Windows and Linux, also playable on web browsers

Maca, a jellyfish-like sea creature, has always been curious about humans and life above the surface. One day, she takes a chance to speak with Lyra, a seemingly disinterested human, and the two soon form a connection. But is this bond healthy for them, and will they be able to bridge the gap between their definitions of love? A well written, and unexpectedly sweet, visual novel about how our connections impact us, for better or for worse.

Art: 8
Story: 9
Characters: 10 (flawed and complicated)
Service: 0
Yuri: 10 

Overall: 9





Arcane: League of Legends, Season 2 on Netflix

December 18th, 2024

Promotional poster for Arcane: League of legends, Season 2. A girl with blue hair looks at us from the bottom of the poster, Her read-haired sister looks to the left from the top of a cast of characters.by Eric P., Guest Reviewer

Back in 2021, a certain animated series called Arcane: League of Legends debuted on Netflix. It made a certain mark, and fans eagerly anticipated the inevitable follow-up in those three years since. The trailer for it dropped, with the announcement of it being the Arcane storyline’s final season coming as a shock of those fans. Would just one more season really round out to a finale that did justice to the story they followed and felt was something special? All they could do to find out was wait until Season 2 finally arrived.

Where last we left off, councilwoman Mel and hextech creator Jayce called together the special council of Piltover to finalize a peace treaty with the counterpart undercity of Zaun. Meanwhile, sisters Vi and Jinx had reached the point where seemingly too much irreparable damage was done to save their relationship. The only response Jinx could unearth from her loss and anger was aim her powerful hextech cannon at the special council, and all Vi and her potential girlfriend, enforcer Caitlyn, could do was watch it happen.

Picking up right where Season 1 stopped, most council members have been severely injured or even killed in the explosion, Caitlyn’s mother included. Jayce and Mel stand as the only two survivors without a scratch, but how is that possible? That is just the first mystery introduced, and Season 2’s narrative wastes no time in getting going as the characters of both Piltover and Zaun react to the domestic terrorist act in their own separate ways, growing a whole new chaos. Ambessa, Mel’s mother and warlord of the nation of Noxus, seems to take special interest in taking advantage of it all by influencing Caitlyn to lead a military rule. Mel contemplates where she should stand, Jayce grows more convinced hextech itself was a grave mistake, and Vi and Jinx go through their own struggles in figuring out where they now fit or can fit in everything.

One of my favorite subplots is where Vi and Jinx’s childhood friend, Ekko, is transported via hextech to an alternate world—and offered a glimpse of what could have been. This is where hextech was never created, Piltover and Zaun live in relative peace, people that died in the past are still alive, and Jinx is still Powder. She and Ekko were allowed to blossom a whole new relationship that was just not possible in the original world, and yet it is that world Ekko makes it his mission to return to. Is it partly because the original world is the “right” one, and this 2nd world is “wrong”? Ekko admits there is nothing wrong at all with the 2nd world—he just cannot stay for the simple reason that he did not earn it, as well as due to his own responsibilities that anchor him to his home world.

This is just one of several narrative elements to appreciate and enjoy about Season 2, and I mean several, delivering much more than just the star relationship relevant to Okazu. Mystery and complication keep following one after the other like a running stream, with new and returning characters continually being added to and taken out of the mix from the beginning all the way to its epic end. Upon reaching the start of the final episode itself, it especially left this reviewer wondering as well as worrying—can this really stick the landing? Yes, it has been announced that there will be branching spin-offs, but with everything they have already done on this one series alone, can they properly wrap up the Arcane storyline on a reasonably satisfying closed loop before making way for new bonus chapters?

Short answer—I would say yep. After the wild, crazy, often unbelievable ride the animation took its viewers on, after all the tragedies that often bluntly overtook the triumphs, we get payoffs and full-circle resolutions galore that hurt so good like they should, just as much unexpected as well as partly expected. One of many things I appreciate about this story’s ending is that it makes clear regardless of whoever wins the final battle, it does not mean peace and harmony of any kind will follow. As long as humanity exists there will forever be conflict, and for that we can only do the best we can and never be off our guard. That kind of message is especially resonating in our world now more than ever, for better and for worse. This message is also what helps set up (along with the ambiguity of a couple characters’ fates) the promised future stories that could go literally anywhere from this point, and I have no doubt plenty of fans are already intrigued to see what the creators cook up next.

Ratings:

Art-10 This is said to be the most expensive animated series ever made, which absolutely shows and is well-spent on a handful of gorgeous imagery I certainly have never seen before—while also illustrating no matter how brutal and grim the world is, there remains an underlying beauty regardless

Story-10 Almost overwhelming while just succeeding in not being messy, it is really hard to imagine what could be improved when all is said and done. Then again, I heard somewhere that the final episode was originally a full 90 minutes, which I never would have guessed but makes me hope we might get the uncut version for this season’s possible Blu-ray release

Characters-9½ There was a traitor reveal toward the end that I did not care for, but I may well be in the minority on that. Otherwise, the characters all have their moments of making morally questionable choices, but it shows they are just people doing what makes sense to them and their personal circumstances, rather than just simply be protagonists one unconditionally roots for

Service-4 There are really only two scenes of serious intimacy I can recall offhand, but they pack quite a bit especially in the second one while managing to stay confined within its PG-13 rating

Yuri-7 Vi and Caitlyn are inevitably canonized. Beyond that, it is a payoff (amongst many) one should see for oneself

Overall-10 Once again, just see for yourself—assuming you have not already




When the Villainess Seduces the Main Heroine, Volume 1

December 4th, 2024

A busty blonde woman in low-cut red dress is embraced by a smiling black-haired beauty in a low-cut dress and corset as they lay in a plush bed.Guest review by Paul S. Enns

When the Villainess Seduces the Main Heroine, Volume 1 by Kasai Fujii, is a ridiculous bit of fluff, ending with an equally ridiculous story.

It’s about the Villainess, Akuya Krei Jou, seducing the Heroine, Sei Hi Roin, away from the Prince, San Punkan. All of which happens in the prologue, a whole four pages.

After the prologue, the next hundred pages are 90% lovey-dovey day-to-day activities of two women deeply in love with each other and the other 10% what Yaaba (Akuya’s housekeeper and instructor) and Stray (the stray cat that loves watching lesbian love) think of that.

Then it goes dark.

That’s where story happens, and it really changes the mood. It’s where Sei shows that she can get out of trouble and not just depend on her partner to rescue her. It’s where Akuya gets to show off how villainous she can be to protect Sei. It’s where… No. I’m not going to spoil it. But it did induce some squick in me.

While there is plenty of service, there’s no actual genitalia shown. Breasts and discussion of what Akuya will do to Sei and Sei’s reactions cover it.

As a whole, I enjoyed the fluff of the beginning. The story felt like it was from a different writer writing in the first half’s style. The jarring difference was too much. If it made up its mind and was one or the other, it would work better. I say “first half”, but the story part is half as long. Still sticks in my memory better than the fluff.

My favorite short would have to be the one that deals with consent. It’s an important topic to me.

The translation feels solid. Every gesture and sound is given a translation. Nothing jarring in the text to signal problems. Another stellar job by Yen Press.

Looking at the original review of the Japanese version, I must sadly say that none of the punny names come through in English.

Ratings:

Art: 7 Better like long eyelashes.
Story: What story? But I’ll give the story part a 3.
Characters: 7 No denying that Akuya and Sei are lovely together. Stray gets some good humor, too.
Service: 7 I’ll not rate higher without genitalia shown.
Yuri: 9.5 To be 10 there wouldn’t be any sex with men, right?

Overall: 5

It should have been just the shorts, but would this be Volume 1 without the story? It does end with “To be continued…”. I don’t know which would be better: more shorts or more story. It doesn’t leave me optimistic. We’ll find out when Volume 2 arrives in the new year.