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Yuri Game: Sapphism no Gensou, Guest Review by Mara

October 10th, 2009

Brain is a bit melty today, so it is with great relief pleasure that I welcome Guest Reviewer Mara for today’s post! And even better, because as you know I don’t game and have no interest in games, Visual Novels or anything similar. So what a genuine pleasure to be able to provide you all with a review of the Sapphism no Gensou game that came out a few years ago and is undeniably Yuri. Take it away Mara!

Personally I do not comprehend the thinking behind same sex schools. Most of all I disagree with the argument that they somehow protect their students from something. But to each their own.

The school from Sapphism no Gensou on the other hand, I get. Not content with the usual standards of security a private school, the H.B. Polestar is a giant ship that sails an undisclosed course across the ocean to provide the best and most luxurious education for the daughters of the elite. Think a floating Ashford academy and you will not be far off. This is the absurd and fun setting of Sapphism no Gensou a visual novel by Lair-soft who since have done nothing else of note although they have kept with the theme of an unusual setting in nearly all their games.

This game’s unusual setting is home to a powerfully diverse cast, and not just diverse in the usual visual novel model of: ‘girl for every taste so we maximise sales’ way. The main character Anri, some sort of experimental fusion of Utena (Revolutionary Girl Utena) and Tamaki (Ouran Host Club), deserves mention for not only being out but also deliberately going to this closed-off all-girl school so that she has the highest possible number of girls to hit on. Such openness and self-confidence are refreshing in a female main character in general, much less a Yuri main character. So much so that I overlook Anri’s massive ageism as a required character flaw (she gets over it anyway).

Anri is not alone in this story – besides the three main heroines, who are for the most part the dullest characters; there is Anri’s pre-existing, pre-Iono harem. These characters deserve an article all to themselves mainly because half of them are completely bonkers. For example there is Nicolle, the long-fringed daughter of an Italian mafia don who talks machine gun fast and has a serious gambling ‘interest’. Kanae, Anri’s sempai and incredible computation genius, who is addicted to coffee and goes into withdrawal if she misses her regular fix. Anne Shirley, the daughter of a Columbian drug lord, who constantly offers the rest of the cast giant fistfuls of ‘medicine’ and talks to spirits invisible to everyone but her, and the player.

I could go on forever.

For the most part the entire cast is made up of fantastically far out individuals with suitably silly dialogue; each scene with them is a treat. It is a good thing that the supporting cast is so amazing, as the three main heroines about which the three main story routes revolve are the dullest cookie cutter characters that could hope to disappoint you. This is almost appropriate though because the main story is utter crap.

Simply put, the writers seemed to have deliberately picked the only form of a closed circle mystery that could completely turn one’s stomach. A series of sexual assaults have been committed on board the H.B. Polestar and in this all female environment immediately the out lesbian is inaccurately labelled as the suspect. So much so that the onboard authorities decide to expel Anri regardless of her guilt so that they can escape charges of incompetence themselves. If this summery so far has not made you throw up then let me close it by saying that we are treated to one of the assaults as the opening scene of the game in an act of Somme-level idiocy by the designers.

This half of the story is so at odds with the pleasant atmosphere of the other half that I am truly convinced that Sapphism no Gensou was written by two completely separate groups who then shuffled their scripts together before sending it off to the producer. It is a real shame because this game does have some greatness that is not totally obscured by the crap that makes up the rest.

Luckily, the idiots who wrote the rape half of the game were fired for the special DVD edition of Sapphism no Gensou. This version comes with a whole game’s worth of extra short stories and scenes that expand on the all of the characters with further disregard for being disgusting in preference for being silly. All the characters get at least one including the main character and the old lady who founded the H.B. Polestar.

If you are a complete collector like myself then you should buy the DVD version of Sapphism no Gensou as the extras make it more than worth it. However I cannot recommend such a game generally when there are other, better, Yuri visual novels out there.

Art – 7
Story – For the main story: 3 For everything else: 8
Characters – 9
Yuri – 9
Service – 10 (a massive neon 10 advertising a swimsuit maid cafe)

Overall – 8

I truly liked this game but I cannot recommend it to others for the same reason I would say that you should not become friends with a racist just to borrow their car.

Thank you Mara for reminding me just why my aversion is something to treasure and nurture, rather than get over. lol And thank you for today’s review! As I’ve said many times, if you, dear reader have a Yuri game you’d like to review, please contact me. Legitimately purchased copies only, no downloaded or pirated games, please.





Hidamari Sketch Manga, Volume 4 Guest Review by George R.

September 2nd, 2009

It’s Guest Review Wednesday once again on Okazu and once again, it is my sincere pleasure to welcome George R. for this week’s guest review!

The fourth volume of Aoki Ume’s Hidamari Sketch manga (ひだまりスケッチ) came out in Japan this past January. I was a bit slow in picking it up, but am glad that I did. It doesn’t have a deep involved plot or more than hints of Yuri, but then again Hidamari Sketch never has. If you’ve liked the previous manga, light novels, or anime, you’ll probably enjoy this as well.

Ume-sensei has a strong cast of characters already and we can again enjoy the amusement in their daily lives. But she doesn’t make them carry the entire load in this character-driven manga. The first extra we meet is Yuzawa Arisa, a senior art major, who is the only one left in the art room to answer Yuno’s phone which she forgot there. She can’t resist Yuno’s cuteness and has her pose for a sketch.

The end of the school year brings exams and Yuno does poorly enough to need to take a supplementary test on English grammar. Everyone offers their help, each in their own way, and thanks to that she scores 100% on the retest.

A new school year brings new students to Yamabuki-high, and two new freshman neighbors to Hidamari-sou. The landlady talks the Hidamari-four into help clean their rooms before they move in.

Nori moves into room 103 and adds a modern touch, bringing her computer and the internet to Hidamari-sou. Her computer-related interests are incomprehensible to the other residents, but they accept and welcome her all the same. She also becomes a good friend and supporter of the other new resident.

Nazuna is a polite, timid girl who moves into room 203 next to Miyako. She had lived in the area, but had to move when her father’s job transferred him elsewhere after she was accepted to Yamabuki. She feels unready to live on her own, being bad at cooking and cleaning. Yuno gets the chance to grow, as she learns to support Nazuna like the others supported her last year. When Nori wants to put up curtains, Nazuna is able to direct them to the local “I’m Home” [Depot?] to get them. Ume-sensei is able to show humor in this simple shopping trip, though perhaps Miyako with a chainsaw is more frightening than funny.

The volume ends with an extra chapter of “ordinary manga,” instead of the usual 4-panel. This tells of Natsume’s entry to Yamabuki-high, and how she met Sae on her first day there a couple years ago. She finds that Sae’s confidence, looks, lifestyle and career make her irresistibly cool, and so develops a huge crush on her. When she finally gets the courage to go talk to Sae again, she finds Hiro already talking with her about what to make for dinner. Sae’s easy thanks and offer to accompany Hiro grocery shopping on the way home shatter Natsume’s dreams, though not permanently. Previous volumes show us that Natsume continues to carry a torch for Sae.

This volume offers the humor and double-meanings I’ve come to expect from Ume-sensei. What Yuri can be seen centers around Sae, in either her relationship with Hiro or Natsume’s crush on her. I think the level of Yuri peaked in volume 3, with this one returning to that of the first two.

Over time Ume-sensei’s art style has grown on me, or maybe I’ve come to see it as the natural way to depict these characters I’ve come to like.

Did this volume blow me away? No, but that is also not the style of Hidamari Sketch. Did it give me a wonderful time with my “old friends” at Hidamari-sou and added some new ones to the group? You betcha! Did I enjoy it? Definitely. Several times I was glad not to be drinking while reading, as spraying manga with milk from your nose is not a good way to take care of it, or any other book.

Ratings:

Art – 7
Story – 6
Characters – 8
Yuri – 1
Service – 1

Overall – 7

I hope that Yen Press will continue on and translate this volume as well. There’s really just one way to encourage them to do that, and that’s for all of us to show them it’s profitable by going out and buying the first three.

Absolutely agreed George. Our support for this genre must be expressed with $ or we’re just killing the thing we love. Thanks again for a loving look at this gentle slice of life comic!





Hidamari Sketch Light Novel: Hidamari School Life, Guest Review by George R.

July 22nd, 2009

I really intended on writing my own review today. Then I ended up sacrificing some hours to the gods of Tech Support and by the time I was done, I just couldn’t do it. I just couldn’t. Sorry. Bravely, George R. has leapt into the gap to save my shattered nerves and so, I commend him and his review to your care. It’s all yours, George!

I enjoyed the first Hidamari Sketch novel enough to go right on and try the second one, and I was not disappointed. Hidamari Sketch: Hidamari School Life (ひだまりスケッチ―ひだまりSchool Life) concentrates on Yuno’s life at school, as opposed to the first one at her apartment. We are again treated to a set of short stories, where the characters are the focus, not the action.

Autumn has come to Hidamari-sou and tomorrow is the day for everyone to change from summer to winter school uniforms. I’ve always been amused that the Japanese schools change their uniforms according to the calendar regardless of what the weather may actually be. Apparently consistency schedules trump practicality.

Aoki Ume, the manga-ka, has again done the illustrations. Each of the four chapter illustrations show one of the characters partly wearing the blazer of their winter uniform, as if they aren’t sure if it’s suitable for the current weather or not. Their characters clearly show through in they way they handle their blazers.

I like the way Yuno still looks at the world with innocent pleasure, and enjoys simple things like her new uniform. This gets her thinking of how she might grow during the rest of her school career, though maybe only a few millimeters. She even tries out standing on cushions to see how the world will look from a taller perspective.

The other residents of Hidamari-sou are fun to meet again. Miyako is as off-the-wall and full of energy and appetite as always. She has a good heart, but ends up causing trouble and amusement. Sae and Hiro are the “Yuri couple” that everyone knows of, though this is more told to us and hinted at than actually shown. In fact, if you take off your Yuri Goggles and tilt your head, all the Yuri can disappear.

In addition to new uniforms, Autumn brings falling leaves. As Yuno and Miyako rake them up at school, Miyako’s thoughts naturally turn to food, in this case roasting potatoes in a bonfire. Miyako’s solution to the school forbidding this is to bag the leaves up and have the bonfire at Hidamari-sou. Yoshinoya-sensei joins them as do Hiro and Sae, though Hiro only agrees to join if Sae promises to keep her from overeating. They all try the potatoes and agree the leaves lend an especially good taste (they sounded so good I made baked potatoes for dinner). The principal comes by and tells them they shouldn’t be doing this unsupervised (I agree Yoshinoya-sensei doesn’t quite count). They convince him to join them and help pass on this school tradition of roasting potatoes instead of stopping them.

Autumn also brings exams, and Yuno finds her room has too many distractions to let her study successfully there. Sae promises to help, and the four meet after school in the library. Yuno sees how each of them have different individual methods, and we are treated to some more teasing about Hiro supporting Sae while she’s writing her novels. Yuno finds that this environment and study partners really do help. Time comes for them to leave and Sae gives Yuno the “certain victory” she promised earlier, a collection of her and Hiro’s tests from last year as a study-aid. Their sempai helped them out in the same way last year.

A student teacher comes to Yuno and Miyako’s class to do her practice teaching. Maejima-sensei is polite and reserved, and Miyako thinks she looks a tall version of Yuno. Yoshinoya-sensei wanted to be her mentor, and she went to great effort cleaning up in preparation for her arrival. Her running around confused Miyako and Yuno, in fact. However, the principal puts Maejima under the teacher in her field, Modern Japanese.

Lunchtime in the cafeteria after Maejima’s first appearance is crowded, so Miyako invites her to join the Hidamari-four at their table. When she finds the four know each other from living at the same apartment, Maejima says she often visited friends living there while she was going to Yamabuki-high. Yoshinoya-sensei later joins the table, to Maejima’s delight. We find that she actually was Maejima’s inspiration to go into teaching.

When Maejima-sensei has finished her observing and stands up to try teaching the class, Yoshinoya bounds in to “help” with her combat nervousness. I think it’s actually her concern rather than the make-up that helps Maejima. Maejima does pretty well teaching until the principal and assistant sneak into back classroom door to observe. This quite flusters her, and it takes the attention and good wishes of the class to calm and restore her spirits so she can continue.

Maejima returns to the university after completing her classroom practice. She sends the class a letter thanking them for helping and inspiring her, both while she was there and with letters afterward. She closes thanking both the class and Yoshinoya-sensei and resolves to become a good teacher so she can return to Yamabuki-high.

I think Higurashi Chaboh manages to capture and maintain the essence of the characters, and they’re what drew me to Hidamari Sketch in the first place. Maejima fits well with the rest of the cast, in fact Higurashi-sensei was able to use her to improve my opinion of Miyako and Yoshinoya. Their interactions with her show they both have caring hearts under their annoying behaviors. These two are the favorite characters of some. I still find them annoying at times, but am happy to also see them in a better light.

Now, if only Higurashi-sensei would write a novel focusing on Sae and Hiro.

Ratings:

Art – 6
Story – 6
Characters – 8
Yuri – 1
Service – 1

Overall – 7

If light novels in Japanese aren’t your thing, I still recommend the Hidamari Sketch manga. The four-panel format doesn’t allow as full a story as a novel, but Yuno and friends are just as fun. Yen Press has done a good job with their English versions, too. Here are reviews of the first and second English volumes.

Erica here. Thank you George! This Light Novel sounds like a relaxed, pleasant time spent with characters we like to spend time with.





Hidamari Sketch Light Novel: Youkoso Hidamarisou e, Guest Review by George R.

May 20th, 2009

Thank you, thank you George R. for providing us with another guest review. My head is exploding and I’m running out of the house, and like magic, there in my inbox is a review. Phew. Anyway, once again, our applause and thanks to guest Reviewer here at Okazu, George!

After enjoying Memories Off 2nd ~ Precious Hearts, I decided to find more that Higurashi Chaboh had written. A novelization of Hidamari Sketch caught my eye. I enjoyed the manga (the first three volumes are out in English as Sunshine Sketch, Volume 1 and Volume 2 have been reviewed here on Okazu) and was curious to see how the transition from 4-koma comic to light novel would work, so into my amazon.co.jp cart went Hidamari Sketch: Youkoso Hidamarisou E (ひだまりスケッチノベル―ようこそひだまり荘へ.

The illustrations are spot on, though few, but that’s to be expected since Aoki Ume, the original manga-ka, did them. While they’re good pictures of the characters, they don’t illustrate events in the story.

I feel the strength of Hidamari Sketch lies in the characters and their interactions as they go about their daily lives. This holds true for the novel as well. If you’re looking for a deep, involved plot, this is not the place to find it. But I still find myself entranced by the residents of Hidamari-sou.

This novel also begins with Yuno getting ready to move in and start high school. This is her first time living on her own, and both she and her parents have to make an effort to let go. They do, and Yuno is able to have a fun and busy time in her new apartment.

We’re then introduced to the rest of the residents as we follow Miyako as she wanders around seeking fun and food. Miyako lets nothing get between her and food, going so far as to ask Yuno for hikkoshi-soba, the noodle dish that instead should be given _to_ Yuno on her moving in. While some readers enjoy Miyako, I find myself sympathizing with Sae’s irritation at her antics. She does keep things lively, though. Thankfully the other characters make up for her.

Sae and Hiro, the two upper-classmen living at Hidamari-sou, make a nice couple, though what form their feelings for each other take is never explicitly stated. In addition to being a schoolgirl, Sae is a published author. Thanks to Hiro’s care and feeding last year, she was able to finish her prize-winning story and turn pro. Since then Hiro has become an indispensable part of Sae’s personal life as well
as her literary creation.

In addition to caring for Sae, Hiro becomes the defacto “mother” of our little “family” at Hidamari-sou. Miyako even refers to her as Oku-sama (someone else’s wife or mother). This naturally leads to Sae being called Otou-san (dad), much to the embarrassment or annoyance of Hiro and Sae. If Sae and Hiro are the “parents,” then Yuno and Miyako fill the roll of “children,” with Miyako being an lively and sometimes irritating sibling to the cheerful but unsure Yuno.

I like the way Higurashi-sensei chooses to flesh out the characters by giving Yuno and Miyako the school assignment to draw portraits of people they care for or feel grateful to, and to put these feelings into their drawing.

We get to know Yoshinoya-sensei better when she comes over for a “home visit” to Yuno and Miyako. She seems completely focused on two things, cosplay and her students, almost to the exclusion of all else. She’s an interesting foil for the others, and is probably the most immature of the bunch. For example, she figures that an unoccupied room in Hidamari-sou that the landlady neglected to lock is free for her to store her various costumes in. If it weren’t for her genuine care for her students, I’d be have a much lower opinion of her.

The last adventure of the novel has Yuno taking care of Yuta-kun, the child of the landlady’s friend. Miyako stops by and drags them both through the fun of a game of hide-and-seek which ends up bringing in Hiro and Sae as it runs through their rooms. Everyone has a fun time, especially Yuta, and Yoshinoya-sensei even comes by and captures a group photo of them all as a memento for him.

Ratings:
Art – 6
Story – 6
Characters – 8
Yuri – 1
Service – 1

Overall – 7

I had a good time reading this novel, even though “nothing happens” in it. All the characters are firmly planted in my mind, and I’m looking forward to meeting them again in the second novel. Yes, I enjoyed this enough to buy the next one. I share Erica’s wish to see further Yuri adventures of Sae and Hiro, though I doubt these will appear in the second novel. I’d also like to share a meal with the girls,
talking about cooking with Hiro, writing with Sae (and also read her work, though it would embarrass her) and art in general with the others.





Yuri Anime: Candy Boy, End of Season Review, Guest Review by Mara

May 12th, 2009

I have asked you, my readership, to supply reviews of various things from time to time. Last weekend, I expressed a desire to have a review by someone who enjoyed Candy Boy. It is now my genuine pleasure to welcome Guest Reviewer Mara for today’s opinion. Everyone, please give Mara your attention and support! Yay~ /applause/

It was short.

It was pretty.

It was adorable.

Those were my reasons for watching the first episode of Candy Boy, and really all anyone needed to have a reason to watch it. Sisters Kanade and Yukino (apparently twins) both are enrolled in the same art school and live in the same dorm. The ONA covers a misunderstanding that barely threatens their relationship for less than a week.

As it was a small piece of promotional material it was animated surprisingly well with shaded expressive characters and shots taken from interesting angles. Part of this was to save money not having to animate so much movement; instead we are shown close-ups of held hands, someone’s eyes or the perspiration on a glass that gives us a taste of the mood underneath the dialogue in a given scene.

Now, apparently, this became famous enough that a web-release series was considered viable and we then got another seven episodes, of approximately the same length, with slightly less of the money saving camera work that I loved so much.

But the story moved along in its own ineffectual way. Everything was still pretty just not as much now. They had a bit more money but did not lengthen the episodes much; so not much can be conveyed even in the third and forth two -part episodes or the twenty minute finale.

As far as the Yuri in this series goes the producers played it far too safe considering the target market. Looked at arms length you could say: ‘Well, they’re just very close sisters.’ This is irritating when it was clearly the relationship between these two characters that made the one-off promo a seven-episode series. Thus the relationship became the anime equivalent of talking about something without ever truly examining it. This was a wasted opportunity in my opinion, but at the same time you cannot ask for the world from a small seven episode ONA.

Despite all that, I really enjoyed the interaction between all the characters. A four-character cast shown in snapshots of a few minutes feels rounded due to a pleasant blend of cliché and enjoyably tender moments between each individual over the course of the series.

Ratings:

Art – 10
Story – 6
Characters – 7
Yuri – 7
Service – 10

Overall – 8

As someone who was definitely the target market for Candy Boy I found it very enjoyable, often anticipating another episode of inconsequential cute fluff.

Again, my thanks for this review. And not just because it provides me with a day off! lol I appreciate perspectives that are not my own. In fact, as of right now, I am officially stating this:

Wanted: Guest Reviews for Okazu.

I am looking for people to review the following series:

Mariaholic
Koihime Musou OVA
Queen’s Blade (when the season ends)

If you enjoyed these series, and would like to tell people about them, then please shoot me an email. I can only pick one person per series – and should I get more than one submission, I apologize in advance for any inconvenience. Once I give you the go ahead – then go ahead and write your review! You can read my Okazu Guest Review Guidelines for some guidance on what I’m looking for – or if you have a great idea you want to review but aren’t sure what I want in a review.

I look forward to receiving your guest reviews!