The problem with writing alternate history is that you have to figure out where things go, as china has discovered in Kunoichi Bettegumi Igarashi Satsuki series.

To understand this volume, it helps that you know of the Namamugi Incident, in which a British citizen refused to move off the road when the Satsuma daimyo’s party passed by and was beheaded for his failure to follow the law. Great Britain demanded monetary compensation, apologies and the deaths of the daimyo’s retainers or they would attack. The British Fleet bombed Kagoshima, but, as the New York Times reported at the time, lost the battle. Kagoshima was gravely injured, but the British fleet was pushed back. Both the captain and commander of the flagship the HMS Euralys were killed, probably in a gun accident. It’s also good to understand the Japanese political landscape of the Bakumatsu period (with which I am only just becoming familiar, due to this series and Oni to Yoake Yuzikiyo (鬼と夜明け 夕月夜) manga.

And, lastly, you might want to learn about the Boshin War in which the British allied themselves with their former enemy of Satsuma (because, let’s face it, a destabilized government is good for colonial powers.)

Okay, now that you know about all of this, you’ll understand that, in Kunoichi Bettegumi Igarashi Satsuki, Volume 4 ( くノ一別手組ー五十嵐五月), Yokohama is facing bombardment from that same fleet, and the same Admiral Kuper who flattened Kagoshima, is demanding Yokohama conform to his control. If you know anything about Japan, you’ll understand that in 1863, Kagoshima is to Yokohama as Miami is to New York City. That is to say, a place where people live and trade happens, but it’s not the same scale at all.

You probably expected me to follow up all of this with “now, forget all that” but, no, all of this is actually relevant to this final volume.

The deadline the British set to be paid compensation for the loathsome Richardson of the Namamugi Incident is approaching. Yokohama, in this story is responsible, not Satsuma. The Bakufu cannot raise the money, so Vlad offers to guarantee the loan. Only, the British have pressured all the banks in Japan to freeze her funds, so she hurries off to Shanghai, telling Satusuki to protect Scarlet, Admiral Kuper’s daughter. Presciently, as the ninja from the last volume Kaoru, Koharu, and their leader Takagi attack the now-fortified Kuper compound, with the intention of kidnapping Scarlet. Satsuki defeats them, but Admiral Kuper is not pleased. He is forced to ask Satsuki what she would like as a thank you and she asks only that the British do not start a war. Meanwhile, the British Parliament is debating that same war.

In Shanghai, Vlad drives up the price of coal and food for the British, and drives down the worth of the pound sterling, then returns to Yokohama where they now have the money to pay the British. Satsuki is given a position of honor at the front of the caravan for thw payment….but they know they will be attacked and so they are. In the ensuing battl,e Takagi and his counterpart Masumitsu fight Satsuki, and we learn that they are from Satsuma! Oh no! Satsuki wins the battle, but the war is still pending because….

…back in Yokohama, Admiral Kuper was convinced to stand down, but then the Shogun canceled the compensation payment and the British consulate gets word (from a slavering Prime Minister Gladstone) to get ready to bombard Yokohama. The Americans, French and Russians have already said they will join in if Britain starts a war.

Admiral Kuper’s daughter Scarlet climbs the main mast of the flagship and threatens to shoot herself if the fleet does not stand down. The Admiral tries to argue that it’s his duty, but she rounds on him about it’s pathetic that Britain picks on weaker countries and calls itself “strong.”

In the meantime, the British forces at Yodobashi bridge see the samurai protecting the compensation money being attacked – they defy orders to shoot, instead running to help Satsuki and the rest.

The money is paid and the war is averted. Satsuki is offered a position in Edo, which she turns down, preferring to stay in Yokohama. Clare is sacked from the English Embassy for passing information to Satsuki, but is given an official recommendation to Vlad from the Ambassador. Scarlet decides to study business and become Vlad’s protege. Satsuki will be able to be with Clare, Scarlet gets to be with Vlad and Vlad gets the kiss she made Satsuki promise to give her.

And in the end, as peace returns to Yokohama, everyone lives, presumably, happily ever after. Even the ninjas.

Some months later, in London, Prime Minister  Palmerstone and former  PM Russell are talking about Queen Victoria’s words, “Vlad is in Japan, leave it alone.” Palmerstone asks Russell to find out who the hell this ‘Vlad” is.

The End.

Ratings:

Art – Always never what I want illustrated. ^_^;
Story – I learned a lot, honestly.
Characters – There were a lot and many of them are terrible people in real life, but noble somehow here
Service – One kiss and not even the right couple
Yuri – 0 and 10. Clare and Satsuki are an item, but they have like 3 scenes together

Overall – 7 Very slow in places to tell the history, but I made it through the series!

In the author’s notes, we get some of the background for the fictionalized version of the real people of this story, and the admission that the author 1) likes vampire Yuri, 2) wanted to write Yuri about the Kunoichi Bettegumi and 3) did a lot of reading on Wikipedia to write this series, as I did reading this series. ^_^

This series ended up being one of those “absolutely historically accurate, except the bits that aren’t”kind of stories. After all this, my only complaint is that I wish this book spent a little more time on Vlad and Clare and Satsuki than Takagi and his ninjas. But I have to say that I learned a lot about the Bakamatsu period this year from reading manga and LNs so, that’s a net win. ^_^

Among the many remarkable things in Piero Karasu’s light novel series, the most remarkable to me continues to be the  author’s willingness to address issues after the happily-ever-after of the romance plot. In The Magical Revolution of the Reincarnated Princess and the Genius Young Lady, Vol. 6, having faced and reconciled with her brother who caused Euphyllia so much grief, and the college of magic whose members previously opposed her, Anis is now taking on a crisis that has been brewing on the outer reaches of their country.

That the crisis is merely okay as a plot line does not change my opinion that it is a remarkable thing that this series is both continuing and also addressing the consequences of Anis’ and Euphie’s partnership, as well as the remaining problems in the country as we know it. Problems that are, conveniently, not poverty or social injustice. It’s true that Anis’ ideas for use of magic stones seems to be more on the side of capitalism than socialism and the proliferation of flying vehicles, for instance, strikes me as less useful for the commons than trade and military, but she’s trying.

Was I deeply irritated when the 1) greatest and most powerful of all the Vampires was basically 2) a lonely child 3) with an extremely limited vision of what “togetherness” is? Yup. Very. On all three counts, so the climactic battle was not engaging except as an exercise in tactics – but that, too, does not detract from the fact that this author cleans up their messes, which is both unique and interesting.

In the end, Anis and Euphie as a couple are cute and Anisphia and Euphylia as a ruling couple are interesting and I’d like to read more because I am a fan and don’t want to let go….

Ratings:

Art – Inconsequential and moe
Story – 8 for intent, 7 for execution
Characters – 9, except for the Most Powerful Vampire In The World who was a 5
Service – More in intent than practice, but I am becoming inured to the series’ coyness about sex
Yuri – 9

Overall – 7

….but I am very, very done, with powerful immortal, supernatural beings that look and think like children. LN authors, please get a new idea already.

We just had the pleasure of reviewing The Magical Revolution of the Reincarnated Princess and the Genius Young Lady, Vol. 4, a Light Novel that did every thing right. So it only seems fair that we look at how similar elements can be put together in a way that doesn’t work all that well. And it comes down to one thing. So, today we’re looking at The Executioner and Her Way of Life, Vol. 6: A Casket of Salt.

When we left the cast at the end of Volume 5, Menou was about to have a showdown with her mentor, Flare. But before that happens, we have a lot of random things that occur. Plot points that have been set up wiffle and fade, as new characters wander in and make themselves important, and all the characters we currently have and know, just do things that may or may not have meaning.

When the climatic battle does occur, it ends up as it had to and we feel…not much. Then we meet The Lord of this world…and if I felt anything, it was a vague sense of annoyance for introducing another plot complication without resolving any of the existing plot complications first. And that is the main problem with this series. It’s a dogpile of miseries, with no end in sight. Well, not entirely true – we know the series will end, but is any of this worth it?  I’m still on the fence. I’m still reading, but still on the fence.

What has kept me reading this series has been the unique form of magics created and used by the various groups in the world, but as all of them are corrupt and evil, it becomes a much of a muchness. There are no good people here, and probably no good ends.

There is also, undoubtedly, Yuri. Menou and Akari are bound in two planes of existence, Momo is obsessively in love with Menou. There’s still room for something to happen with Momo and Ashuna, as well, which I have to assume will happen when whatever is going to occur between Akari and Menou occurs. 

Ratings:

Art – 6 It has improved this volume
Story – 5
Characters – 7
Service – Less than usual
Yuri – Akari loves Menou, Momo loves Menou…

Overall – 6

In the meantime, I find myself tired of Human Errors and wishing that a few of the floating plot points would be resolved before author Mato Sato added more. This story desperately needs a rest in between intensities.