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Black Lily’s Tale

April 8th, 2026

The title screen of Black Lily's Tale. Two girls in the same blue Japanese sailor-style uniform, with red ties, A girl with collar-length blonde hair is behind a girl with pale long hair. They hold hands over the pale-haired girl's head and to the side.

by Ashley Payne, Okazu Staff Writer.

Stop me if you have heard this before: Hana Sasamori has been friends with Itsuki Oomiya all through high school. A few days before graduation they discover they like each other… NOT the end, as it turns out. Despite a slow start Black Lily’s Tale (available on Steam and Crunchyroll) actually takes some time to address modern issues queer youth have to face, albeit with a vague science-fiction blanket over it.

Black Lily’s Tale has perhaps one of the more roundabout introductions for a game of it’s type. We are introduced to everything with a whole lot of point and click examinations and learning how choices work. In Black Lily’s Tale you have to type in your own choices at the right time rather than wait for the game to give you several possible answers to change the story.

A screenshot of the game Black Lily's Tale with the three central characters Hana Sasamori, Itsuki Oomiya & Aoi Nishiki in contemporary coats over their school uniforms. Hana's line is "He said it was because we made a bulk purchase..."

That said after this brief introduction on how the game will be played, we then have a nearly two hour introduction to the characters and setting where none of that will be relevant. While the actual core characters of Hana, Itsuki and their mutual friend Aoi are all fun people to be with, most of the introduction is bogged down with a lot of sci-fi baggage to what otherwise is a very contemporary story. It doesn’t take long for the Doylist reason for this to become apparent it never stops being odd that of all the names, ‘biophone’ was the name the writers settled on for their smartphone analogues.

A screen shot of Black Lily's Tale with several paragraphs describing Hana Sasamori having to deal with compulsory heterosexuality at her school. Hana wears a grey knit cable sweater jacket over her school uniform and has long, pale hair with a flower on a braid on the left side of her face.

 

A screenshot of the game Black Lily's Tale with the three central characters Hana Sasamori, Itsuki Oomiya & Aoi Nishiki in dark blue Japanese sailor-syle school unforms with a red tie.. Hana's line is: "Ahaha! No one loves sharks quite like Aoi, huh?"

 

That said, the real reason for all this exhausting world building is so that they can take what would have otherwise been a ‘story A’ style game and actually address issues like compulsory heterosexuality and conversion therapy. It’s almost elegant until you realise that everything worth talking about in Black Lily’s Tale is happening today, right now. Children are being pressured by compulsory heterosexuality right now. Children are being forced through conversion therapy right now. 

A screenshot of the game Black Lily's Tale with Hana Sasamori, who had long pale hair, with a flower on the brain on the left side of her face, confronting Natsu Kakizaki, who has short, boyish cut red hair. Hana is saying: "It doesn't matter if we're both girls! There's nothing wrong with loving someone!"

 

A chart of the language of flowers. Focusing on flowers beginning with 'A'. Hana is thinking: It'd be nice if the language of flowers gave us some kind of clue towards the answer Ai's looking for...

While Black Lily’s Tale has it’s heart in the right place I can’t help but feel all this was just so they could turn escaping from one of the more traumatic things queer youth suffer from into a game.

A screenshot of the game Black Lily's Tale with Hana Sasamori coming to realise that her feelings have been pathologised. Hana is thinking: Understanding of heterosexuality? Stunted?

Once everything became clear it was nice to see a yuri story in this high school environment that actively takes deliberate effort to explore what current day youth are experiencing. That said it is precisely because this game deals with something that so many queer people have experienced first hand I’d recommend Black Lily’s Tale with a content warning of what it deals with so people can be prepared.

Ratings:

Art – 3 (I don’t like live 2D sorry, everyone is always bouncing.)
Story – 8
Characters  – 7
Service – 2
Yuri – 7

Overall – 7





I Wanna Be Your Girl, Volume 3

March 11th, 2026

Two people in Japanese style school uniforms, one in boy's uniform, one in girl's uniform, their head on their knees, sit on a school stairway.by Eleanor Walker, Okazu Staff Writer

We have now reached the penultimate volume of Umi Takase’s I Wanna Be Your Girl, and having also reviewed volumes 1 and 2 here on Okazu, this one is definitely the weakest of the three. One thing this series continues to excel at though, is portraying teenagers realistically. Hime is still headstrong in her convictions and her determination to protect Akira. Akira, meanwhile, just wants to be treated like one of the girls and be noticed by the senpai she has a crush on. At the end of volume 2, we start to delve into another character’s back story. Hamuro is another student who has a secret of his own. He cross dresses as a maid while working at a cafe near the school, and it’s revealed that he’s not trans like Akira but cross dresses to support his younger sister Momo who was bullied for being too cute.

I don’t really feel Hamuro adds very much to the story, and the whole starting cross dressing because your sister was bullied just seems a little too out there, especially for a seemingly cishet teenage boy. Fortunately, it’s not a big part of this volume. What we get after Hamuro though is something I’ve hoped would happen since volume 1, and that is Sasaki-sensei’s backstory. I mentioned in my review of that volume that “It seems though, that there is more to the teacher than first meets the eye. He sits Hime down for a talk one day, and it’s strongly suggested that he’s gone through something similar regarding identity in the past” He now reveals in a conversation with Akira that he is aromantic, and how he has suffered from not meeting society’s expectations too. I’m glad we got this segment, especially since in the afterword the author mentions that he was only supposed to appear briefly in chapter 2.

The rest of the volume is just more of what we’ve already seen before, Hime and Akira continue to misunderstand each other, side characters are used as sounding boards for the main characters to talk about their feelings and we’re not really any further forward with their relationship either.

I Wanna Be Your Girl is still an enjoyable series and I’m very glad it exists, but nothing new really happens in this volume, especially when compared to the previous two. I’m optimistic though that everyone will get their happy endings in the next and last volume, and I’ll be reading it to find out.

Ratings: 

Story – 6. This would be a point lower if we didn’t get Sasaki-sensei’s backstory.
Art – 6.
Characters – 7 Hamuro and his sister are unnecessary.
Service – n/a
LGBTQ — 10

Overall – 7 but again, probably an 8 if you’re a confused/closeted queer teenager looking for something to relate to.





Pink Candy Kiss, Volume 4

February 25th, 2026

Cover of Pink Candy Kiss, Volume 4 by Ami Uozumi.Two women in green dresses embrace, lightly, looking forward at us, with soft unfocused eyes.by Eleanor Walker, Okazu Staff Reviewer

At the very end of volume 3, which I also reviewed here on Okazu, an unexpected character from Ema’s past reappears. It’s her mother and there’s clearly some history between them, as within the first two pages of of Pink Candy Kiss, Volume 4 she makes a snide comment about Ema’s hair and clothing choices. Ema also contemplates how long it’s been since she saw her, and how much older her mother looks. Hario does at least stand up for his wife, but the cruelty is very pointed and definitely hurts Ema in a way that I’m sure many of the audience will be able to relate to, so much so that she’s ready to give up on the cafe and have Hario handle it instead. There’s nothing like a mother’s love and support is there? At the end of this chapter, Takara asks Ema if she wants to run away. The next chapter opens with another confrontation with Ema’s mother, but this time it’s Takara standing up for her.

The “will they won’t they” dynamic continues to be the crux of this series, although I do worry about how much longer it can carry the story. We’ve known for a while now that Ema and Takara are head over heels for each other, and I just hope that we get a proper confession from someone sooner rather than later, since we did not in this volume. The characters are still wonderfully messy, flawed and above all, realistically human. For that reason, Pink Candy Kiss continues to be one of my favourite ongoing Yuri series, and I’m eagerly awaiting volume 5. I also think it would make a fantastic live action drama, if a company would be brave enough to produce it.

Ratings: 

Art – 7 It’s still a shame there aren’t colour pages with the chapter art on.
Story – 8 The living apart situation is still a little contrived, but the rest works very well. 
Characters – 10. Ema’s mother is vindictive, cruel and totally realistic, as is Ema’s reaction to her. 
Service – None. It still doesn’t need it. This is a story about women’s feelings, written by a woman for other women.
Yuri – 10 So much yuri.

Overall – 8

 





Star Sword Nemesis

February 13th, 2026

Title art for Star Sword Nemesis. On the left a girl in a jersey jacket and short skirt floats upside down, holding an enormous sword. An older woman, with white streaks in black hair looks askance. On the right a series of concentric circles, with a round blou dot on the other circle and he title of the game.by Ashley Payne, Okazu Staff Writer

Star Sword Nemesis, a new novella from Christine Love, wears its robot anime influences on its supremely fashionable sleeves. You might think that a novel where on the ninth page someone puts up a slide that consists solely of the sentence: “GIANT ROBOTS MAKE YOU STUPID.” would be more of a subversion but no, this story is doing what I have been asking for: make a robot story for the lesbians.

Our heroine Eris is struck with a profoundly relatable problem. Her instructor Halley is so cool and competent Eris’s crush on her is making it hard to focus on their lessons on wielding Star Sword Nemesis. Having a crush on Halley is a profoundly foolish idea, not just because Halley is Eris’ instructor, as Halley was an enemy combatant until a few months ago.

This results in the irresistible force of “I can fix her” meeting the immovable object of “This is the real world kid”. What is truly impressive is that it chooses very different points of tension than you might be expecting if you were familiar with kissing books. It has great fun indulging in the expected peaks of confession and heartbreak and then pushing past them with a refreshing resolution that spins the story forward. The momentum really shifts up at the halfway point, becoming almost impossible to put down.

While the core of the story is Eris rushing headlong into what appears to be obvious betrayal, it is entwined with some of the most impressive sci-fi world building I have had the pleasure to read in a while. We learn about the semi-untopian society of the Trans-Neptunians both directly, with Eris talking with her friends and in the moments when Eris and Halley miss-communicate. It really reminded me of the brief moments in an Ian M. Banks Culture novel. Only here the Trans-Neptunians are not an idealised, post scarcity society, but a small collective holding on to their ideals in the face of direct hostility from the Earth Sphere.

Star Sword Nemesis is only one hundred and fifty-eight pages but it is broken up with wonderful art from Max Schwartz, who illiterates key events light novel style. Only we get more art per page in Star Sword Nemesis in delightful colour too. Frankly, comparing Star Sword Nemesis to a fun light novel is the ideal comparison. It is short, straightforward, has a powerful sense of its world and characters and has a denouement better than most novels.

Ratings:

Art: 10
Story: 7
Characters: 8
Service: 10
Yuri: 10
LGBTQ+: 10

Overall: 9

I know for most of the people who read this blog Star Sword Nemesis is barely an afternoon’s reading and it is well worth one afternoon.





#Gal x Gal Yuri, Chapters 1-11.2 on VIZ Manga

February 4th, 2026

Five gal/gyaru-style high school girls pose together in front of a blackboard. From the left is a blonde-haired girl with red highlights wearing a pony tail, a blonde girl in a bob cut with purple highlights, a long-haired brunette with tan skin winking while showing a peace sign, a blonde long-haired girl, and a the tallest, a silly-looking girl with a very long black hime-cutby Matt Marcus, Staff Writer

Have you ever thought to yourself, “Why search for a new lover when I could be dating my bestie instead?” Well, do I have a yuri for you!

#Gal x Gal Yuri is exactly what it says on the tin. Blonde bubbly Yua and the cool tan beauty Reina are high school comrades in cosmetics who decide to spend a year dating each other, and I quote verbatim, “for the vibes.” We see them go on dates, celebrate birthdays and holidays, become the spring festival mascots of their class (and run a maid café, natch), and finish their year-long experiment very much still in love.

And that’s chapter 1.

My instinct is that the first chapter was a one-shot doujinshi that was repurposed for the serialization, but it’s funny how much gets jammed in there before things slow way down for the remaining ten chapters of the volume.

The dynamic between the leads is simple but fun. Yua is so enthusiastic to the point where she is constantly gushing or gloating about her affection for Reina, in a way that disarms anyone who might have looked sideways at an openly queer relationship (notably, they encounter no trouble with anyone on that front). Reina, on the other hand, plays the “straight man” role mostly by rolling with or occasionally reining in Yua’s flights of fancy. But really, this is a comedy series and the jokes do mostly land. Occasionally Yua’s talk about sex makes me want to take a spray bottle to her, but I can’t say it seems out of character for a teenager.

There are other supporting cast members—a pair of twins Akane and Shion, and Yua’s childhood friend Yazawa (a “rocker” chick who is somehow the most head-empty of the cast)—to help round things out. Yazawa takes up most of the air when she is present, but for the most part this is the Yua and Reina show.

Inoue’s art helps carry this series. It’s cute without being too cutesy; the fashion is, of course, well represented; and I find the reoccurring off-brand Instagram posts charming. The one thing I would say I don’t have a firm perspective on is Reina’s skin tone and what it could or could not signify; my bet is that it’s simply an aesthetic choice.

If you like gals being more than pals, this one is worth smashing that follow button for.

Ratings: 

Art – 8 Appealing, reasonably detailed, used well to emphasize gags
Story – 7 Not a lot of plot but enjoyable nonetheless
Characters – 7 Characters are shallow but very charming
Service – 4 One panel of a bath scene, plenty of sexual jokes, lots of gyaru fanservice
Yuri – 9 Plenty of yuri “for the vibes”

Overall – 8 highly decorated nails out of 10

While the first tankobon is available in Japan, the current 11 chapters (plus two bonus stories) are currently only available in English on the VIZ app and website.

Matt Marcus is a cohost of various projects on the Pitch Drop Podcast Network. You can find him mostly reskeeting Yuri posts and sports takes on Bluesky @hyperartmarcussan.bsky.social