by Matt Marcus, Staff Writer

“So, how did y’all meet?”

Ah, this old chestnut. You think back to the countless times you’ve told this story, each iteration becoming more and more exaggerated and elaborate. It’s not that you are trying to fool anyone, you’re just tired of going over the same beats time and time again so you’re trying to have a little fun with it. As you recount the story, you sneak glances at your partner, watching them roll their eyes as you enthusiastically assert how impressed they were over tales of your prowess at Magic the Gathering. OK, you were terrible at flirting, and still are. But no one else has to know that.

Kiss It Goodbye: The Complete Edition is the story of Aruka and Yukimi, two women in their mid-twenties. One night, a friend of theirs asks them to tell the story of how the two, who are of very different temperaments, got together. Aruka is a rough-and-tumble tomboy with a penchant for throwing fisticuffs while Yukimi is a studious girl with a love of fashion. They meet as children, grow close together up through middle school, have a falling out in high school, but reconnect before graduation. A couple years later they realize their feelings for each other and begin dating. The end!

If that were all there was to this story, you wouldn’t be reading this review. There are a handful of things that seem like small pieces but add to a story that reads better than its synopsis. The framing device adds so much character to the telling. Aruka tends to puff herself up only to be brought back down to earth by Yukimi. They talk honestly about their feelings and how they evolved over time. It’s a nice way to spice up what could be a pretty standard story and doing so in a way that allows the characters to express themselves.

There are other unique factors. I like how instead of opting to settle for maximum drama, the big turning points in Aruka and Yukimi’s relationship are worked through in awkward, vulnerable conversations. OK, there is definitely SOME drama, but plenty of the development happens beyond that. I like that the two are not the same orientation: Aruka is an allosexual lesbian however Yukimki is biromantic and asexual. It’s rare to see a pairing to see partners with different needs manage to work things out. The two even have different socioeconomic class and career backgrounds.

Although this story takes place in Japan, it is drawn by Ticcy, who hails from Italy. I find it is interesting to look at a work that borrows heavily from manga but is shown through a different cultural lens, which puts this book in the same bucket as the works that have been reviewed on the site such as Alter Ego, Just Friends, and Mahou Josei Chimaka. All of these works vary in how much they borrow from manga, with Kiss It Goodbye sitting somewhere between the latter two in that the setting is clearly influenced by Japanese media but the art, paneling, and dialogue have a more Western flavor.

What drew me in right away was the art. The character designs are clean and expressive, there are plenty of detailed backgrounds, and the whole comic is rendered in beautiful color. The whole package The series originally published on the online comics platforms Webtoon and Tapas, but was adapted into print through the publisher Hiveworks (who coincidentally also published Chimaka) after a successful Kickstarter in 2022, which I backed. It’s one of the nicer printings on my growing yuri shelf, in a large format with stout glossy pages. Thankfully, physical copies are now publicly available on Hivework’s website along with an eBook option. KIG was released typically one page at a time, but thankfully it was storyboarded in such a way that you would not be able to tell its webcomic origins in print form. (Also, regular GL webcomic readers may spot a familiar face or two in some crowd shots.)

I would say the biggest criticism I have is false advertising. See, this is called the Complete Edition, however there is more comic out there! Ticcy has written two additional bonus chapters to date that are not collected here and supposedly there is more to come down the road. The book also lacks any additional commentary that came through Q&A segments Ticcy posted during the comic’s run that help flesh out some details on the characters that didn’t make it into the main body of the story. I would suggest anyone who picks up the book also go find the comic online in order to get that extra content. Ticcy has hinted at the possibility of a second book down the road, but at the moment there are no plans for release and new bonus chapters have been on a hiatus as she focuses on her newer series Dragon’s Mercenary that she posts on her Patreon page.

Really, the biggest sin is that there is criminally little time spent with Aruka’s softball club-cum-girl gang, especially their leader Saori. Would love to see more of them in a future bonus chapter. Did I mention there is a softball club that beats on street toughs? Yeah, gimme more of that.

Ratings:

Art – 10 Really gorgeous front-to-back, especially in print
Story – 8 The flourishes in the delivery make an otherwise standard story stand out
Characters – 8 Aruka and Yukimi bounce off each other well in both the comedic and dramatic moments
Service – 1 Would be higher with more girl gang escapades
Yuri – 10 / LGBTQ – 9 Would like to see more atypical identity pairings like these two

Overall – 9 It is high! It is far! It is…GONE!

I met my wife on New Year’s Eve having just driven 6 hours that day to move to a new city without a job, an apartment, or much of a plan to get either. If you ask nicely, I may tell you the rest of the story someday.

Matt Marcus is a cohost of various projects on the Pitch Drop Podcast Network. Any tales of his exploits as a teenage delinquent have been greatly fabricated.