It’s my favorite day of the week today, Guest Review Wednesday! And today we have our Senior VN reviewer Louise P to tell you about a lovely new VN by the folks at Aikasa Collective. So, welcome back and  take it away Louise!

If you watched anime in the early 00s you probably were sick of sitcom shows set in some remote home, often Japanese style, filled with a bunch of young people who will not communicate properly, that we were supposed to find cute. Something that was very hard to do when characters were constantly in conflict due to either ignorance or malice. 

It’s wonderful then that we have Mizuchi, which follows Linh after she is rescued from being executed by Ai, a mysterious snake woman that Linh sees as a goddess. Linh ends up living with Ai and the two are later joined by Jinhai, a traveling former monk who has a lot of history with Ai.

Mizuchi‘s setup might sound familiar to you but that is where the similarities end. For starters while Linh may be the main character Ai and Jinhai are not jealously competing to seduce her. Instead we are given time for everyone to get to know each other in the usual manner for a visual novel, by talking about the food they are going to eat and the little quirks in the languages they speak.

But this is a yuri visual novel, we’re here for romance. Mizuchi does well by clearing the low bar of ensuring that the characters fall in love as they learn about and help each other. We fall in love with Ai along with Linh as she walks us through ‘baby’s beginners book of feminism’. Jinhai has plenty of opportunities to be dashing and kind so that by the time the game contrived a reason for Linh to fall out of a tree into Jinhai’s arms I was ecstatic rather than bored. 

It was really nice that so much of Linh’s time with Ai and Jinhai is learning skills and knowledge from them that were denied to her by her family or by wider society. Linh doesn’t just fall in love with Ai and Jinhai but also improves herself by learning from them and being mentored. Linh’s grows from someone who just goes along with what people set for her into a person committed to deciding their own fate. 

The story doesn’t ignore Ai and Jinhai’s relationship either. They are charmingly written like they are a pair of on again off again ex-girlfriends. It is delightfully clear in the way that the two both snipe at each other but also have nothing but good things to say about each other when they are alone. Ai will openly admit to how noble and kind Jinhai is but then at the same time she will wave a freshly butchered pig’s head in front of the very vegetarian ex-monk.

Mizuchi capitalizes on this charm with some of the best sprite animation since Heart of the Woods. I’m not a fan of sprites taking center stage, however the sprites in Mizuchi are endlessly endearing. Characters settle behind tables, slide smoothly in and out of frame and all three main characters have expressions that match them well. Particularly with Ai and Jinhai who have exppresions that play to their strengths to get the reader to fall for them in the same moments Linh does.

Sadly this wonderful found family situation is often hijacked by the wider framing. Whenever we are reminded of the village Linh has escaped from, the story develops a mean streak that does not gel with the scenes of day to day life.

At the beginning of the story, Linh is saved from execution in her hometown by Ai. This was brought about by a wrongful and sexist accusation of adultery. However Linh regularly desires to return to her family who we had last seen giving her over to a bloodthirsty mob. How she expects this to work out on her return is not something the reader ever learns it just becomes irrelevant way too late in the story. So at several points in the story we have Linh, our main character, pining to return to a town that we the reader have only come to hate. It is a real mood whiplash.

This is further compounded when Ai, the person who overtly points out the cruelty in patriarchy, constantly has her power demonised both in the story and by Jinhai. Whenever Ai gains or exercises power within the story she is criticized so much more than any of the men who willfully harm others for their own gain.

Jinhai openly says that if Ai were to rise to her true potential Jinhai would seal her. When this inevitably happens in the climax of a few routes Jinah jumps to seal Ai away even though the only reason Ai is transforming is to deal with a far more malevolent threat. A threat that is overtly male coded compared to whatever threat Ai poses. 

For a story about three women living together, where the main character is saved from being executed by a society that has deemed her worthless, having the final conflict being: “Oh no our powerful friend is now too powerful.” seems like entirely the wrong tone to take. 

Which is a shame because as I said earlier for most of the game these are charming characters who play off each other well and respect each other. Perhaps the best part of the game as a whole was that all three never stopped being friends in any of the routes. No matter who Linh ends up with the other never becomes jealous just to throw some additional conflict into the situation. Mizuchi does know that it is possible to be happy for others.

The story of Mizuchi is, at its core, one of three women supporting and nurturing each other, that eventually blossoms into a love that helps all of them become better people. A good relaxing summer romance read.

Ratings:

Art – 9
Story – 7
Characters – 8
Yuri – 6
Service – Well there are sex scenes and bathing scenes 10?

Overall – 7

Erica here: Thank you so much for the review. This sounds like it really hits all the marks on narrative, and style. Thanks for walking us through it. ^_^ Thanks very much to Aikasa Collective for the review copy!