Cocoon, Entwined, Volume 6

June 26th, 2024

Two girls with long, flowing hair in white, flowing dresses run offscreen, clasping hands and looking at one another.Guest Review by Patricia Baxter.

As the curtain closed on Yuriko Hara’s Cocoon, Entwined series, I knew that a truly remarkable story had ended.  There have been times when I’ve experienced narratives, manga or otherwise, with strong writing in their characters and world-building, only for the ending to stumble, negatively altering my perception of the entire work.  Thankfully, Cocoon Entwined did not falter but instead ended in a tremendously fulfilling way, both in terms of its numerous visual book ends and how each principal character emerged from their metaphorical cocoons.

As the Christmas dance reaches its climax, the cycle of Hoshimiya Girls’ Academy is finally disrupted in a dramatic and unsalvageable way.  Even more shocking is that this disorder isn’t caused by Youko, the main protagonist, with her verbal plea for change, but by Hoshimiya-san whose actions speak the loudest without saying a single word.  Some readers may be put out by Youko not having the big dramatic “win” during the dance, but I felt Hoshimiya-san being the one to unravel this unchanging cycle made the most sense.  Between her familial connection to the school, her dramatic exit setting the stage for the whole narrative, and the way she has been constantly idolized and objectified by other characters, it is only fitting that Hoshimiya-san finally reasserts her agency by ending the system.

Thankfully, Youko has her moment of personal triumph when she meets up with Hana in the dressmaking room for the last time.  Youko shows just how much she has grown since the beginning of the series, and Hana is finally taking the initiative to step away from her role as the “prince”.  Their dance might be one of my favourite sequences in this series, showcasing just how much these two girls have changed themselves, and each other, for the better, genuinely making me misty-eyed as I read it.

The rest of the cast is also given their chance to change and move forward, though Ayane and Haruka’s story felt a bit rushed in comparison to the rest of the cast.  I honestly wish we would have had more time to explore their relationship, especially considering how much Haruka has been impacted by Ayane’s actions, but the resolution we do see is still satisfying.

As always, Yuriko Hara’s art is some of the most gorgeous art you can ever read in comic form, with extremely striking visuals that stay with you even after you have closed the book.  It is clear to me that she is an astounding talent in the medium of comics, who continues to develop and hone her skills, and I look forward to seeing what projects she tackles next.  I also sincerely hope that we can get her two manga collections, Out of the Cocoon (アウト・オブ・ザ・コクーン) and Atami no Uchujin (熱海の宇宙人), in English someday soon, since her talents in writing and art also excel in one-shots, as showcased in the Éclair and Bloom Into You anthologies.

Cocoon, Entwined was a delight for me to read, both as a yuri manga for its depiction of sapphic relationships and as a manga for showcasing the power of storytelling that only comics can achieve.  Even if I can’t see more of Youko and Hana’s story, I know that they are walking together, moving forward and always remaining open to changing themselves for the better.

 

Art: 10

Story: 10

Characters: 10

Service: 2 (for Youko and Hana wearing slips on the cover and during the dance sequence)

Yuri: 10

Overall: 10



The Executioner And Her Way Of Life, Volume 7: Lost

June 24th, 2024

A blonde girl with long hair tied up in a black ribbon bow, tugs on the collar of yellow over her blue dress, black crop top and white pants.In Volume 6 of Mato Sato’s isekai fantasy light novel series, the promised battle occurs and it ends and there are no apparent consequences at all. Which was only a little surprising, given this series penchant for adding new plot devices, world-building elements and characters freely as a form of adornment, rather than support.

It was, therefore very surprising to begin The Executioner And Her Way Of Life, Volume 7: Lost to learn that in the last 6 months story-wise, a great deal has happened. Instead of showing us, the author decides to tell us, leaving us not so much reading a novel as reading the very comprehensive guide to a novel. Every character is a paragraph of description, followed by their abilities and eventually, some small nugget of their history that might be relevant to the scene, to be added to as the next scene happens, and the next as if we are having this book told to us by a DM rather than a novelist.

I ain’t mad though, because given how many new characters are added and how much has occurred since the last novel, actually having to read the multitudes of scenes would get in the way of the few interesting things that actually happen in this book.

Sahara has not been a particularly fascinating character…until this novel. She’s clearly meant as mediocre foil to Menou’s status in the story. When we catch up with her here, this failed priestess with a magical prosthetic arm is wallowing in her mediocrity, and ennui. As the story develops, she finds that she has little choice but to grow and become a better person – and it annoys the daylights out of her.

What makes this evolution especially noteworthy is that the person she is protecting is someone we (I, definitely) had kept forgetting to care about.

In a series with a lot of throwaway characters, Maya, the little finger of a Human Error, was particularly forgettable, except as a reminder that this writer really likes to torture young girls – something I am not okay being reminded of. Maya’s redemption arc is extraordinary. That it pulls Sahara, and in some ways even Menou herself, along with it, is even more notable.

What worked best in this volume here was the almost complete removal of characters we have focused on in previous volumes. Menou herself is a side character in this novel, but what she chooses to do hints that 1) maybe the author finally has a plan and 2) she might be developing a personality. Both are welcome additions to this narrative.  We find ourselves with something that looks like in the future it might become a resolution, after we fight the next big bad on the way to the biggest baddest. With accompanying grossnesses for grotesquery’s sake. Thankfully, Mato Sato is about as interested in writing the grotesque as I am in reading it, so those scenes tend to be in that guidebook format, rather than lingering.

You may be asking why I continue to read this series. Trust me, I have asked myself that, as well, but, in this series – which is literally a tale of many ways in which humans lose their humanity – the addition of simple kindnesses and connection between people was something that genuinely made this volume worth reading.

Ratings:

Art – 6 Irrelevant as usual. One cannot keep telling us these characters are gorgeous then give us this art.
Story – Begins at 5, but ends at a strong 7
Characters – 8
Service – Light guro
Yuri – Less than usual, and somehow more poignant as a result of it all being so offscreen.

Overall – 7.5

It comes down to the fact that I quite like the construction of the magic and the world-building and kind of want to see where it leads?  I mean, will Menou (or /the person she was originally/) ever reunite with Akari? I dunno. I don’t even know if Mato Sato knows. But I guess we’ll have to find out one day, right? ^_^



Pulse, Volumes 5-7

June 23rd, 2024

by Eleanor Walker, Staff Writer.

Content warning: Volume 6 contains scenes of sexual assault.

A blonde with long hair in an orange dress and a long dark-haired woman wearing a beige top embrace happily.

Remember when I said back in my review of the first two volumes “does this hospital not have an ethics board?” Never did I predict this statement would come back to bite the way in the way that it has.  The hospital director, who we met at the end of volume 4 is cunning, ruthless and will stop at nothing to get what she wants, which is Mel. They have history together (they are ex girlfriends), and thanks to something Mel did which is never explicitly discussed, although it is covered in flashbacks, she cannot use her hands properly and had to give up being a surgeon. She is quite clearly a sociopath who only sees people as tools to be used and thrown away once she’s finished with them.

Back to Lynn and Mel. At the end of volume 1, they made a bet “If I can get you to fall in love with me within 2 years, will you be the one to operate on me?” It’s now time to call that bet in, or is it? Volume 5 sees Lynn’s condition getting worse, she’s back in the hospital and been moved to the top of the transplant list. But the director steps in, and the donor heart is sent elsewhere. Coincidence? I don’t think so. Lynn has to have another operation to place a device in her heart to squeeze out some more time while waiting for the transplant, and the director bursts into the operating theatre mid surgery and orders Mel to leave the room immediately.

 

A blonde and a dark-haired woman share an intimate moment, as the blonde takes the other woman's glasses off, as she sits on the floor next to a bed.

Because of the situation Mel finds herself in, in volume 6, Lynn overhears some of the other staff talking, concludes that this is all her fault and it would be best to break up with Mel so she doesn’t lose her career. It’s the least convincing breakup ever, but I’m pleased to report that they eventually find their way back to each other via all your favourite cliches, including a reunion at the airport, as is obvious from the frankly adorable cover of Volume 7.

Lynn finally gets a new heart, the director gets her long awaited and well deserved comeuppance, and they all live happily ever after. How far we’ve come from the stone cold woman who doesn’t believe in love, and the journey has absolutely been worth it. I’ll certainly be reading again from the beginning, and at 7 volumes the story is a nice length without dragging itself out too much.

 

 

 

A blonde in a wedding dress and a dark-haired woman in a wedding suit smile at one another happily.

Lynn and Mel continue to be the main attraction of the series, and although you do want to tell them to just talk to each other sometimes, we wouldn’t have a story otherwise. Olivia also deserves a lot of credit for being brave enough to stand up for what she thinks is right.

The art is as attractive as ever, and the erotic scenes are well crafted without leaving much to the imagination. Seven Seas have once again done a lovely job of designing the covers, and the interior printing is of good quality with clean lines.

Hot off the press, Thailand is expected to legalise same sex marriage by the end of the year.

 

Ratings:

Art: 8. As charming as it’s ever been.

Story: 8. Enough twists and turns to keep you guessing and even thinking the unthinkable. The side story with Mel and Crystal at school is also very fun.

Service: 10. Graphic depictions of sex with very little left to the imagination, as always. Also, Mel in a suit.

Characters: 9. Olivia, thank you for doing the right thing.

Yuri: 9.

Overall: 9. As I said for the first two volumes, if you’re looking for something with adult characters and a decent bit of spice which isn’t just porn, you could do a lot worse than Pulse. These later volumes up the drama but if spice is your main thing, you won’t be disappointed.



Cocoon Entwined, Volume 5

June 20th, 2024

On a black background a girl in a black, old-fashioned school uniform runs off the cover, her long hair flowing across the cover behind her.Guest Review by Patricia Baxter.

If there is one word you could use to describe the penultimate volume of Yuriko Hara’s Cocoon Entwined it would be “change”.  While it is clear that these changes have been gradually building up since the series’ inciting incident of the elusive and mysterious Hoshimiya-san cutting her hair and leaving the school, Cocoon Entwined, Volume 5 showcases how the rest of the cast is now changing, or refusing to change, in response to how they’ve grown or stagnated.The volume begins with an interlude from Takagi-sensei, a teacher who has been present in the series since its first volume, and yet not given much of a role outside of providing exposition on Hoshimiya Girls’ Academy’s history.  We learn about her personal history as a student, watching her two onee-samas’ love flourish and abruptly end once the eldest of the pair graduates.  In the present, Takagi receives a letter from this eldest onee-sama: a wedding invitation revealing that she is engaged to a man.  Takagi’s story reinforces the classic formula of Class S narratives, where the love between two girls is merely “play-acting” love, a “practice” for adulthood where one enters “proper” heterosexual relationships, just as Takagi’s eldest onee-sama eventually does.  These stories are of bittersweet, ephemeral love, that cannot continue outside of the school walls.

Thankfully, Youko enters and disrupts this melancholic narrative, prompting Takagi-sensei to take up the pen, literally and metaphorically, to help re-write the story and end the cycle.  Chapter 30 highlights that while Class S narratives are an important baseline for many contemporary sapphic narratives, yuri or otherwise, they cannot continue as they have in the past.  As the world continues to grow and change, we need to be willing to foster a narrative environment where sapphic girls and women can find happiness together, rather than “grow up” and fall into society’s expectations of heteronormativity.

On the flip side, Ayane’s story shows the negative implications of change, specifically when it is done not out of personal desire, but to fill and fulfill a role for the sake of tradition.  Ayane’s obsession with Hoshimiya-san causes her to latch onto the void she left behind, wishing to shape herself into the “princess” of the Academy, and make Hana her prince.  Ayane’s current arc in the story shows just how damaging holding onto certain legacies can be, as she forces Hana, Hoshimiya, and herself to participate in a cycle that is causing them all grief.

In terms of visuals, Yuriko Hara continues to be one of the most gorgeous and striking comic artists I have ever read, not just in terms of her use of light and shadow, but her dynamic panelling and visual metaphors.  This volume in particular showcases Hara’s prowess in creating some truly haunting visuals, my favourite of which being the two-page spread of the seniors covered in veils before the Christmas party.  This feeling of dread permeates the entire book, even when the scenes are brightly lit, but thankfully the spark of hope, and change, remains true.

Volume 5 of Cocoon Entwined is an excellent book to read, building up on the tension that Yuriko Hara has established since the series’ inception, and continuing to showcase her prowess as a cartoonist and character writer.  While it is clearly setting the stage for the grand finale, it remains an engaging and engrossing read, asking important questions about the nature of the stories we tell and re-tell, and providing an insight into how we can change those narratives for the better.

Ratings:

Art: 10
Story: 9
Characters: 10
Service: 0 (unless you count gorgeous art as fanservice, which would make it a 10)
Yuri: 8, but it’s a bittersweet and, in some cases, more of a performative gesture than genuine desire
LGBTQ+: 2 (Chapter 30 addresses heteronormativity and societal expectations)

Overall: 9



Kunoichi Bettegumi Igarashi Satsuki, Volume 4 ( くノ一別手組ー五十嵐五月)

June 16th, 2024

A woman with long, dark hair in a red kimono wields a sword, while a blonde woman in  dark red western dress stands at her back. Behind them is the sail of a large ship.The problem with writing alternate history is that you have to figure out where things go, as china has discovered in Kunoichi Bettegumi Igarashi Satsuki series.

To understand this volume, it helps that you know of the Namamugi Incident, in which a British citizen refused to move off the road when the Satsuma daimyo’s party passed by and was beheaded for his failure to follow the law. Great Britain demanded monetary compensation, apologies and the deaths of the daimyo’s retainers or they would attack. The British Fleet bombed Kagoshima, but, as the New York Times reported at the time, lost the battle. Kagoshima was gravely injured, but the British fleet was pushed back. Both the captain and commander of the flagship the HMS Euralys were killed, probably in a gun accident. It’s also good to understand the Japanese political landscape of the Bakumatsu period (with which I am only just becoming familiar, due to this series and Oni to Yoake Yuzikiyo (鬼と夜明け 夕月夜) manga.

And, lastly, you might want to learn about the Boshin War in which the British allied themselves with their former enemy of Satsuma (because, let’s face it, a destabilized government is good for colonial powers.)

Okay, now that you know about all of this, you’ll understand that, in Kunoichi Bettegumi Igarashi Satsuki, Volume 4 ( くノ一別手組ー五十嵐五月), Yokohama is facing bombardment from that same fleet, and the same Admiral Kuper who flattened Kagoshima, is demanding Yokohama conform to his control. If you know anything about Japan, you’ll understand that in 1863, Kagoshima is to Yokohama as Miami is to New York City. That is to say, a place where people live and trade happens, but it’s not the same scale at all.

You probably expected me to follow up all of this with “now, forget all that” but, no, all of this is actually relevant to this final volume.

The deadline the British set to be paid compensation for the loathsome Richardson of the Namamugi Incident is approaching. Yokohama, in this story is responsible, not Satsuma. The Bakufu cannot raise the money, so Vlad offers to guarantee the loan. Only, the British have pressured all the banks in Japan to freeze her funds, so she hurries off to Shanghai, telling Satusuki to protect Scarlet, Admiral Kuper’s daughter. Presciently, as the ninja from the last volume Kaoru, Koharu, and their leader Takagi attack the now-fortified Kuper compound, with the intention of kidnapping Scarlet. Satsuki defeats them, but Admiral Kuper is not pleased. He is forced to ask Satsuki what she would like as a thank you and she asks only that the British do not start a war. Meanwhile, the British Parliament is debating that same war.

In Shanghai, Vlad drives up the price of coal and food for the British, and drives down the worth of the pound sterling, then returns to Yokohama where they now have the money to pay the British. Satsuki is given a position of honor at the front of the caravan for thw payment….but they know they will be attacked and so they are. In the ensuing battl,e Takagi and his counterpart Masumitsu fight Satsuki, and we learn that they are from Satsuma! Oh no! Satsuki wins the battle, but the war is still pending because….

…back in Yokohama, Admiral Kuper was convinced to stand down, but then the Shogun canceled the compensation payment and the British consulate gets word (from a slavering Prime Minister Gladstone) to get ready to bombard Yokohama. The Americans, French and Russians have already said they will join in if Britain starts a war.

Admiral Kuper’s daughter Scarlet climbs the main mast of the flagship and threatens to shoot herself if the fleet does not stand down. The Admiral tries to argue that it’s his duty, but she rounds on him about it’s pathetic that Britain picks on weaker countries and calls itself “strong.”

In the meantime, the British forces at Yodobashi bridge see the samurai protecting the compensation money being attacked – they defy orders to shoot, instead running to help Satsuki and the rest.

The money is paid and the war is averted. Satsuki is offered a position in Edo, which she turns down, preferring to stay in Yokohama. Clare is sacked from the English Embassy for passing information to Satsuki, but is given an official recommendation to Vlad from the Ambassador. Scarlet decides to study business and become Vlad’s protege. Satsuki will be able to be with Clare, Scarlet gets to be with Vlad and Vlad gets the kiss she made Satsuki promise to give her.

And in the end, as peace returns to Yokohama, everyone lives, presumably, happily ever after. Even the ninjas.

Some months later, in London, Prime Minister  Palmerstone and former  PM Russell are talking about Queen Victoria’s words, “Vlad is in Japan, leave it alone.” Palmerstone asks Russell to find out who the hell this ‘Vlad” is.

The End.

Ratings:

Art – Always never what I want illustrated. ^_^;
Story – I learned a lot, honestly.
Characters – There were a lot and many of them are terrible people in real life, but noble somehow here
Service – One kiss and not even the right couple
Yuri – 0 and 10. Clare and Satsuki are an item, but they have like 3 scenes together

Overall – 7 Very slow in places to tell the history, but I made it through the series!

In the author’s notes, we get some of the background for the fictionalized version of the real people of this story, and the admission that the author 1) likes vampire Yuri, 2) wanted to write Yuri about the Kunoichi Bettegumi and 3) did a lot of reading on Wikipedia to write this series, as I did reading this series. ^_^

This series ended up being one of those “absolutely historically accurate, except the bits that aren’t”kind of stories. After all this, my only complaint is that I wish this book spent a little more time on Vlad and Clare and Satsuki than Takagi and his ninjas. But I have to say that I learned a lot about the Bakamatsu period this year from reading manga and LNs so, that’s a net win. ^_^