Sunshine Sketch Manga, Volume 4 (English)

February 15th, 2010

Sunshine Sketch, Vol. 4Sunshine Sketch, Volume 4 is meant to be read as a slice-of-life manga.

The problem with this is, to be compelling to me as a slice-of-life, a story needs to be a slice of life that is new to me and it needs to be a slice of life big enough to include character growth and maturity.

Sunshine Sketch is less a slice-of-life than a slice-of-fiction, and an incredibly narrow, unchanging fictitious world in which little ever changes.

We are meant to believe that a year has passed at the Hidamari Apartments, that Yuno and Miyako have moved up as 2nd-years and new students have entered the apartments as 1st-years. But Yuno and Miyako have not changed at all, and the new students take the place of the bicycle and the cat from the previous volume, as props with which the ensemble can run the same gags as always.

Sae and Hiro still have the same ambiguously gay relationship, and while new student Nazuna sort of implies a minor crush on Sae, we spend far more time pondering her popularity with the guys. Nazuna is also so low-self-esteem as to be painful to watch. Nori might be fun, in a series that wasn’t going to cover the same territory over again.

Entrance Ceremony, School Festival, Finals, Christmas, New Semester, Valentine’s Day…etc, etc. This is not slice-of-life, this is slice-of-slice-of-life, one endless rehash of the same dozen moments of high school, with new characters that change nothing. In some sense, this is high school from the point of view of the teachers, a cycle of events that repeat over and over, with only the names shifting to show that time has passed.

George R. once quoted me as saying that the value of sequels is that we are able to spend more time in the company of characters we love. I’ve now spent four volumes with the characters of Sunshine Sketch and know nothing more about them than I did four volumes ago.

Kate Dacey wrote vehemently about why 4-koma comics do not translate well and this manga makes a great example for her argument. There is nothing here to grab a reader; nothing unique, compelling or relevant. I’m more than happy to watch a few moments of peaceful time slip by, but this series is the manga equivalent of watching paint dry. Read any panel and it will read like any other panel. Character reactions will be overblown in proportion to the minor pun or misinterpretation in lieu of a funny punchline. “WHAT!?!” they will say, instead of “hah,” at one of Miyako’s jokes. Yuno will continue to be slightly awkward and not know what she wants. Hiro will be passive-aggressive about food, Sae will be an artist who writes or a writer who draws.

What makes slice-of-life compelling is watching the character over time, watching the slow, small changes that signal maturity. Aria does this. Yokohama Kaidashi Kikou does this with genius. Sadly, Sunshine Sketch has us watching the slow passage of time, with no changes visible. Time spent, but not particularly well.

Ratings:

Art – 7
Story – 6
Characters – 6
Yuri – 2
Service – 1

Overall – 6

Law of Marginal Manga Return – If the characters in the fourth volume are pretty much the same as they are in the first volume, and you don’t have a plot to catch the reader’s attention, you’ve failed to create a good manga. Plot or character – you’ve gotta have at least one.

My thanks today to Okazu Superhero Amanda M. for allowing me to articulate this new Law, by sponsoring today’s review!



Commit an Act of Love this Valentine’s Day

February 14th, 2010

Today is many things is the Chinese New Year. It is also Valentine’s Day. And today I’m going to ask you to do something that has nothing to do with Yuri, but everything to do with love for your fellow human.

Spencer Brodsky is a teenager in the US who cares about people. He created StovesforRwanda, an organization that provides low-fuel, low-cost stoves to people in Rwanda, helping children to have time to go to school, mothers to feed families and a way to save the environment.

Today, for Valentine’s Day, Spencer is hoping you will donate to TentsinHaiti to provide shelter for people whose lives have been devastated in the Haiti Earthquake.

If you have a social media profile on some system, please share Spencer’s sites, and if you can spare a few bucks, please consider committing an act of love this Valentine’s Day and buy a tent for Haiti. If you’re on Twitter, please use the hashtag #TentsinHaiti.

I understand that some of you might not want to do this, and this is not a command, but for those of you who typically spend money on candy or flowers for today, please consider committing an act of love for your fellow humans by supporting Spencer and his cause.

Thank you for taking the time to read Okazu and here’s wishing you all a great New Year and a Happy Valentine’s Day!



Yuri Network News – February 13, 2010

February 13th, 2010

Snatches of Yuri

Shitsurakuen, Volume 2 is out and with it, Sora, one of those aggressively clueless heroines I can’t really like or respect. She is brought to tears by the thought that she might not be able to save all the girls at Utopia.

In Hinagiku Junshin Jogakuen, Volume 2 kinda takes a turn for the annoying. Yui is still in like with Ami, but it appears that Ami is having an affair with the Magic Elf who is their teacher. (It’s obvious she is not, it’s just Yui’s jealous, powerless imagination.) It’s also not a book’s worth of plot.

Hana Horohoro is about Maya, a translator, who is currently living with her former lover Michiru and Michiru’s son, Yuuta. In the same apartment building also lives Yuuta’s father. This comic is a slice-of-life about these four and the alternate family they create for themselves. This is a Feel Comic, so expect a more adult perspective and a tv-drama feel to any hysterics that might occur.

Negative Twin Tower! appears to be a collection of shorts some of which are Yuri, depending on how high your Yuri goggles are set, because you know that all relationships between women must be sexual in nature.

And speaking of Yuri Goggles, the new anime Lilpri, about three ojou-sama will also have Yuri vibes for people who see Yuri whenever two or more female characters share a frame.

Still speaking of Yuri Goggles, a new Pretty Cure series, Heart Catch PreCure! has been announced.

Amanchuu!, Volume 2 is out. I’m told that there is more Yuri Goggle fodder in Volume 2 than there was in Volume 1.

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Yuri Manga

Comic Lily, Volume 2 is out and Volume 3 is in the works.

Takahashi Yotsu, the author of one of the two stories I liked in Yuri Hime Wildrose 4, has got a collection, Love Flag★Girls!! out this month.

Another “new” face coming to Yuri Hime is Aoii Hana, another josei artist who will be doing a cell-phone manga for Ichijinsha. I’m fascinated and hopeful at the current crop of josei artists joining Team Yuri. However, while I’m on the topic, I have to say that I am not at all cool with the cover of Wildrose 5, which is the kind of thing that makes stupid postmasters go through one’s mail.

Aoi Hana Volume 5 is coming this spring. Here’s a picture of the cover from Shimura-sensei’s Twitter feed. No link quite yet, but I’ll get that added as soon as it’s available.

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That’s a wrap for this week.

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Light Novel: R.O.D. Volume 3

February 12th, 2010

Meet Wendy Earhart. She’s working at the British Library, mostly because her Best Friend Forever Karen is, as well. Karen is working to pay the hospital bills for her mother who is in a coma. Karen is driven, focused and determined. Wendy’s just sort of there to be there. She likes working at the British Library, but she has no passion about it. She’s there to support Karen.

Until Wendy and Karen interview to work in the Special Weapons Section. They meet Joker, who asks them a question with no right answer: If you were on a boat with a famous author and his priceless manuscript and the boat went down, which would you save – the author or the book? Wendy says she would save the author, because people are more important than books and the author might create more great literature if he is alive. Karen says she’d save the book, because it is irreplaceable and who knows if the author would ever write something good again, but the book can be reproduced and bring joy to everyone. Joker tells them that they are both wrong.

Joker offers the job to both Karen and Wendy, but Karen turns it down. Wendy, who wants both the job and to support her friend, is roundly scolded by Karen who tells her to get her own life. Karen says goodbye to her ailing mother, cuts the life support, then leaves the Library for good, leaving Wendy to find her own way.

Wendy’s crisis starts when she tries to interrupt someone reading in the Library late at night and almost dies for her trouble. And so, Wendy Earhart meets Yomiko Readman, who ultimately tells her that she would save the book AND the man. But you can only save one, Wendy says, to which Yomiko replies, “That’s why I would save both!” Wendy goes back to the Library and accepts the new job.

Meanwhile teen author Sumiregawa Nenene is doing a book signing in Tokyo and she is not having any fun. And to make it all worse, Yomiko is late. In fact, she’s so late the book signing is over when she arrives. And she’s filthy and smelly. And someone is trying to kill Nenene.

Nenene and Yomiko, having defeated the bad guys, head out to Kyoto for the next book signing where Nenene is once again attacked – apparently her new book appears to have been plagiarized from the best seller by Clive Cussler. Cussler fans are not happy at all about this. But Yomiko – and the pelicans of Kyoto’s landmark tower – save Nenene once again. In a moving scene, Nenene asks Yomiko if her book does seem like she lifted the plot and Yomiko admits that not only does Nenene’s book seem like a ripoff of Cussler’s, Cussler’s was better overall. Nenene is very thankful for the honesty and realizes that she needs to grow and mature as a person in order to mature as a writer. She has a lot of fun at the next book signing as a result of her insight.

The final scene is why Yomiko was late. In short – she was stranded on a tropical island – with no books. It was a rather disturbing short with a bitter look at the difference between liking books and being an obsessive-compulsive bibliomaniac.

As with all the ROD novels, the beginning of Volume 3 was a little slow, the action was a little silly and Yomiko didn’t get to be quite cool enough to slake our thirst. But, the time she spends with Wendy and with Nenene she is so charming, that it’s easy enough to forget the bits where she’s freaking out for lack of something to read.

Ratings:

Art – 4
Story – 7
Characters – 7
Yuri – 2
Service – 2

Overall – 7

Nenene and Yomiko’s reunion and their subsequent heart-to-heart make everything worth it.



Yuri Manga: Yuri Hime Wildrose, Volume 4 (百合姫 Wildrose)

February 12th, 2010

It’s pretty evident that I’m not the average Yuri fan. I don’t read Yuri looking for titillation, I don’t particularly care if a story has sex in it or not. What I’m looking for is a good story.

Short stories are harder than long ones. You have less time to make a reader care about the characters, and less time to develop the situation. A lot of short stories that include sex scenes read like “Plot, What Plot?” stories – even if they aspire to be more than that.

Yuri Hime Wildrose, Volume 4 (百合姫 Wildrose) is a collection of PWP stories and frankly, it doesn’t aspire to much more. This is a collection for the Lowest Common Denominator who want sex in their Yuri and don’t really care much about story, character or plot.

The only stories that stood out to me were Nanzaki Iku’s attempt to *not* do another ShizNat-style story, Morishima Akiko’s story for being something I actually disliked from beginning to end and Takahashi Yostsu’s gang parody.

Nanzaki’s story shows us the relationship between a woman who works at a pet store and one of her customers. It’s sweet, a little dopey and has obligatory sex. It was a refreshing change from his usual. In balance I find myself starting to recognize patterns in the sex scenes he draws and that disturbs me a bit.

Morishima Akiko’s story is set in France, a girl who has to leave takes advantage of the girl she loves in a story that really put me off. It’s classic Cream Lemon, with a super whiny, yet willing to rape to get her way, protagonist. And it’s fake rape, you know, because the other girl wanted it, really. UGH

Takahashi Yotsu’s story was silly. Arisa is the leader of the Wildrose gang, but she falls in love with Serika, they hypercompetent employee at Ichinjinsha bookstore. When Arisa decides to leave gang life for Serika, she finds that her love is actually the Yuri Hime gang leader. Bwah wah wah~~

Other that these, the stories are a mix of unpopular/popular girls, and other blandly typical stories, with sex.

Ratings:

Art – Variable, but I don’t think it got better than a 7.
Stories – 4-6
Characters – 4-6
Yuri – 9
Service – 10

Overall – 5 for me, but more if you think Yuri equals girls having sex.

If having sex is your number one criteria for a Yuri anthology, then this is probably a book you will like. If you’re looking for something with a little character in the characters and oomph in the plot, give this one a miss. I was going to stop getting this series with this book, but Volume 5 is already looking intriguing, so I’ll give it one more try.