Yuri Visual Novel: A Beautiful Ride to Carlisle

December 23rd, 2018

In honor of the massive amounts of Yuri Visual Novels on yesterday’s YNN report, and because everyone likes to feel good about the world, I can think of no better thing to review today than Little Viktoria’s A Beautiful Ride to Carlisle which is described on the site as a “kinetic visual novel.”

To begin with, the story is a straightforward girl-meets-girl plot. Dana is taking a train to spend her vacation volunteering on an organic farm. On the train she meets another woman, Sharon, and the ride becomes something much more than a 5 hour lacuna in her life.

This is not a novel, per se, but there is a nice, long short story’s worth of content. I quite liked that this was written as a piece of writing, with supplementary illustrations that have some motion, rather than presuming the art as a full stand-in for description and narrative. In fact, this is the first VN so far that I have encountered that 1) acted like a story, i.e., didn’t pretend to have game elements and 2) was written in 3rd person. I really liked both those things. It let me release any expectation that the art had any other purpose than illustration. That gave the kinetic aspect a boost up for me.

The art is pretty and the character designs simple and appealing. I would read a manga with this kind of art with no complaint. It’s not the kind of hyper-realistic background art I have come to expect from VNs (and so much other non-film media.) Instead, we are given the feel of being on a train and the narrative fills in most of the rest, and yes, of course that appeals to me. I read books for the narrative, not for the illustrations. I mean, creative teams spend so much time on the art and it’s…a school hallway. Those lockers don’t need to be that detailed.

Which brings me to the characters. I would have both Dana and Sharon over for lunch any day. ^_^ We spend only a short time with them, but they are lovely.

Ratings: 

Art – 8
Story – 8
Characters – 8
Yuri – 6
Service – 0 (okay, maybe .5)

Overall – 8

As a nice little “Story A” confection, A Beautiful Ride to Carlise lived up to its name. 

Many thanks to Viktoria for the review copy. I’ll definitely be interested to see what she’s working on next.



Yuri Network News – (百合ネットワークニュース) – December 22, 2018

December 22nd, 2018

Yuri Visual Novel

Studio Élan announces the release date for their Yuri Visual Novel, Heart of the Woods and the ED by In Love With A Ghost, a snippet of which is available on their soundcloud. The VN will release on February 15 on Steam. You can access the demo there as well.

The website for Sukerasparo’s supernatural Yuri adventure Dantano Folklore is open, with plot and main character visuals.

I haven’t really followed up on this, but is appears that Nico Nico Douga had a broadcast for fans of the Sonohanabira VNs, with the name Lilies Swamp Game Show Channel (this link goes to the Youtube recording of the broadcast.) this news comes from the Twitter feed of NicoNico Douga’s Yuri-Game Love Channel, which seems like a good resource if you like that kind of thing! ^_^

Via YNN Correspondent Sean G, Mangamer is releasing Kindred Spirits on the Roof Full Chorus, a fully voiced version of the Visual Novel. Will my dream come true? Aki’s final monologue spoken? Mangagamer is offering an “upgrade” to the fully voiced version. I might take them up on it.

 
Yuri Manga

Sparkler Monthly has announced an upcoming Kickstarter for a Before You Go graphic novel. Denise Schroeder’s sweet Yuri comic deserves a collected work and I’m looking forward to having it all in one volume.

The next Yuri + Kanojo anthology is available, Yuri + Kanojo – Kossori Kisushite – ( 百合+カノジョ -こっそりキスして-) with a focus on the end of relationships, rather than the beginnings. Sounds cheerful.

 

Yuri Anime

namori’s Yuruyuri is 10 years old and is getting a Kickstarter of its very own to fund a new animation. ANN has the details.
 

Other News

The February Issue of SF Magazine, which is a special Yuri issue, includes an interview with the editor in chief of Comic Yuri Hime, among others, Comic Natalie reports.
 

Do you have questions about Yuri? Write in and ask and I’ll do my best to address them on the Okazu YNN Podcast! Become a YNN Correspondent by reporting any Yuri-related news with your name and an email I can reply to! 

Thanks to all of you – you make this a great Yuri Network!

 



Yuri Anime: Sailor Moon Crystal, Season 3, Disk 2 (English)

December 21st, 2018

As I wrap up watching Sailor Moon Crystal, Season 3, I find that there is indeed a lot to talk about in this final disk of Crystal so far.

First, let us speak of the actual story, in which a very few tweaks to the plot turn a messy confusion into a rather horrific arc.

The Outer Senshi tell us that when they are gathered together and their Talismans resonate with one another, Sailor Saturn appears with the sole mission to destroy everything.

Sestuna says that it was unlikely for them to all have been reborn at all, and for them to be born together is even odder. And we’re told by Haruka and Michiru that they were used to being alone on their planets. They imply that being along was by design to keep their Talismans from being together, and resonating.

We know that as the Senshi awaken in this world, they have imperfect recollection of their past lives. We saw it with all the Inners and Haruka and Michiru. (Not Setsuna, because she is a particularly strange case. PLUTO appears in ‘R’, but we know that to be the Pluto of the future, because for her to be reborn on Earth, the Pluto of the second season had to die and Meioh Setsuna had to be born as a human some years before Tsukino Usagi was born.)

All of this is why I want all anime with magical girls to have an adult, rather than a toy or animal, as a companion.

The story is told wrong because it’s told by people who don’t have all the information and no one told them any different

They believe that, when the Talismans all gather and resonate, Sailor Saturn is caused to be reborn, but it’s pretty obvious that the Talisman resonate because Sailor Saturn is being reborn. Ami really drops the ball on the whole genius thing here.

So what we have are three young woman who are practically unsocialized in their interaction with other Senshi, lacking a guide with the ability to say, “Kids, this is not on you. Saturn will appear when she appears and when she does, your Talismans resonate.”  And we have to assume that their memories of the past are imperfect when they say Saturn destroyed everything, because she explicitly does no such thing, even as we watch her attack Pharoah 90. It’s easy enough to imagine that she never destroyed the Silver Millenium.  Saturn’s use of the word”invader” reminds us that she, too, is an Outer Senshi, tasked with defending the Solar System from invaders. Duh, right?

So I propose that Pluto, Uranus and Neptune remembered what happened the wrong way ’round. The Silver Millenium was attacked and invaded, but not from the outside, from within, so the Outers could do nothing until it was too late. When they arrived, they saw Saturn destroying what was left in order to keep the future safe, because she too has ties to Chronos, aka, Saturn.  Their Talismans resonated as they saw her, but when they were reborn it all got mixed up in their heads, because they are fricking’ children. Haruka and Michiru are 16 years old and this Setsuna is 20, she says she’s a first-year in college.

All of this is to say, I got very little work done today. ^_^

I think Sailor Moon Crystal Season 3 is brilliant, and if I wrote fanfic anymore, I’d write one, because there is a terrific story in there.

The music is good, the writing actually works better here than in the original anime (and the idiotic final confrontation of Outers and Sailor Moon that made no sense is disappeared appropriately.) Professor Tomoe comes off looking much worse, by having any desperation or desire to save his daughter stripped and, as a result, Hotaru’s story is darker and more moving.

Director Kon’s touches of visual homage to the original anime are on point. 

In conclusion, I liked Sailor Moon Crystal, Season 3. It was good.

Ratings: 

Art – 9
Story – 10
Characters – 10
Yuri – 0 really
Service – Not really…unless you are quite desperate

Overall – 10

I hope that the fourth season has been postponed until after the 25th anniversary celebrations are complete. Ideally, they have been working on it all this time, so as a theatrical release it will look amazing. Knowing Toei, they have done nothing and will cheap out and rush the whole thing if the project gets revived.  

 



Yuri Anime: Sailor Moon Crystal, Season 3, Disk 1 (English)

December 20th, 2018

Why yes, I am finally getting around to watching Sailor Moon Crystal, Season 3 just so I can put it on this year’s Top Yuri Anime list. Come at me, I don’t care. ^_^

There were many legit complaints about the animation in the first two seasons of Sailor Moon Crystal, but when Kon Chiaki took the helm, it was much less an issue of animation badly done, than personal opinion about the manga versus the original anime designs. It will probably be no surprise that I came to really like the Crystal iteration of the Senshi because I am whole-heartedly in love with them in every version and cannot be convinced that any version is better or worse than any other. In fact, it was an actual delight to see the manga brought to life in the exact way the creator had initially designed it.

I said in my review of the season when it initially aired, Minagawa Junko and Ohara Sayaka did a bang-up job as Haruka and Michiru and I grinned like a loon the first time through. Well, here it is during my second viewing and here I am grinning like a loon. I really loved this disk. 

We get to see a Haruka and Michiru who are way more confident than the emotionally tortured teens of the original anime, but equally as convinced that their way is the only right way for everyone. Haruka’s seductive behavior feels far more like manipulation; trying to keep Usagi off-balance so she doesn’t take charge. And her non-apology for “confusing” Usagi would be enraging if we had time to process it.  But we don’t, because our attention is split between so many things – Chibi-Usa and Usagi’s growths, Hotaru’s story, the appearance of the Outer Senshi and the many mysteries that lay obscured behind them – some few of which will be made plain in the next half of the series. And,of course, the main plot.

The one genuinely weak part of this series is, shockingly, the translation. Several times on this disk Chibi-Usa’s name is translated as “Small Usagi” which is questionable even if that was not being used as a name.  I was yet again disappointed to note that this translation team still doesn’t get the reference to Ribon no Kishi and hacked the bit about Haruka having the heart of a man and woman to death, then stomped on it. I was not happy at this shameless display of ignorance and crappy translation. Heart of a man and a woman, goddamn it. HEART OF. Get the fucking reference right.

/wipes spittle off mouth/

Other than that, I still cheered when Setsuna returned and saved us all with Dead Scream, I felt terrible for poor, tragic Hotaru, and thrilled at Sailor Moon’s transformation at the end of the disk into Super Sailor Moon. 

The whole thing actually looked excellent in Blu-Ray, so I don’t for a secon regret getting it.

Ratings:

Art – 8
Story – 9
Characters – 10
Yuri – 4, mostly Haruka and Usagi, but then that scene between Haruka and Michiru brings it to 7.
Service – 2 some slight moments with the Witches 5 costumes and camera work being a tad linger-y.

Overall – 10

I am actually hoping that we get the 4th season movie as planned, because the Inner Senshi have really lovely power-up story /sequence in the Dream arc. I’d really like to see that animated.



Comic Yuri Hime December 2018 (コミック百合姫2018年12月号)

December 18th, 2018

This year has given us a number of excellent Yuri manga and anime, but as Comic Yuri Hime December 2018 (コミック百合姫2018年12月号) hit shelves, it brought with it the end of a remarkable (and remarkably unremarkable) manga. Ohsawa Yayoi’s “2DK, GPen Mezamashitokei” is over. 8 volumes over three years, following a story that developed so deliberately that for the first 3 volumes I wasn’t even sure it was a romance story. ^_^

But, it was a romance. An excellent one. Not because there was a lot of drama – because there wasn’t a lot of drama. This was a Yuri romance about two adults created for an audience of adult women….and it showed. The characters did things like take care of their skin and wear makeup and care about their clothes, in a way that the majority of adult women do.  (Individually, your mileage may vary, of course, I do none of these things, myself. ^_^) And this story, which developed so slowly and almost, but never quite, became a harem manga, ended up being a romance between two people readers can actually imagine living happily ever after together.
/Happy sigh/

So while I’m going to miss Nanami and Kaede and their various harems, I’m very happy to have had 8 volumes of this story, look forward to the final volume and to whatever Ohsawa-sensei will work on next.*

In the meantime, this issue of Comic Yuri Hime had a lot to enjoy, including a major turn in the plot of Hisona’s travel story “Goodbye Dystopia” in which Mizuki encounters the woman that Asami may be pining for. 

Shiroshi’s “ROID” is also slipping from it’s original rails into what may end up becoming a much more complicated story. Yay!

Kenou Chiri’s “Scarlet” just got really weird…and, if you recall, it’s about a vampire and a werewolf, so take that as you will.

“Itoshi no Hito” by Takemiya Jin has developed into a sweet (pun intended) food and romance manga and I am quite enjoying it.

Hisakawa Haru’s “Yurikon” continues to be adorably implausible and I enjoy the heck out of it every chapter.

As always, there are other series I am enjoying and others I don’t read, but as a final issue of the year, this volume of Comic Yuri Hime ended as strongly as the year began.

Ratings:

Overall – 8

*And then I came across this… a JP Kindle-only edition of  2DK, GPen Mezamashitokei “Monthly Motivation” (2DK、Gペン、目覚まし時計。『Monthly ヒモチベーション]) following Ohsawa’s obsession, Nanami’s kouhai “Ruuko” and I laughed and laughed. I hope to god we get a spin-off volume about her. ^_^) Update: This is available (in Japanese) on Bookwalker. Thank the gods for Bookwalker, is all I have to say.

The January issue of Comic Yuri Hime is already available. The new year is off and running!